that was really cute! I hope you continue this, it's awesome!

Wow.

Up until now, all I did was watching Anime, and reading fanfictions sometimes.

But when I read your story, I just couldnt stop to read (I am not lying).

Your story was about one of my favourite games AND it was perfectly written.

Im looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope you dont stop writing.

PS: If somebody says to you, that you can not write there is only one thing to do DO NOT BELIEVE

THEM! Have more self-confidence, because you are one of the best writers Ive ever seen.

It's good

I hope it has more raguna/mist moment...

Can't wait for the next chapter )

Keep writing!

it was ok... but why is it rated M ?