if only there was a second outsider who carried around one of those huge hammers used in strongman-contests who'd bop the kids over the heads whenever they acted out! I might have to write something similar to this, with one of my OC's as that outsider.

I think you got Joker right! White's a cryptic gentleman while Black's a straight-forward asshole!

Well I don't wanna know where nightmare got pinched and blood and gowland deserved that except a little less than blood

"Do nothing stupid,"? Well that what they do for a lifetime

*facepalm*

Just so u know black swears like a lot. Just so u know

To me, the most ironic thing about this chapter is Julius and Elliot thinking they're going to be friends, but Julius ends up having Elliot imprisoned when they grow up. So much for BFF's.

This is super good I love it!

Are you ever going to post chapter 5? Or is it gone forever?

I'm sorry if you've answered somewhere else, but are you going to post the original Chapter 5? From the reviews it sounds like it was really, really good, and I'm sure everyone wants to read more of your writing (and NEEDS to read the Hatter jokes, or maybe that's just me)

This is was really good! I hope you update Cardcaptor Alice soon! Blood was so cute as a kid! I'm guessing the title means "Gay"? See ya, Allora chan

I love this story soooo much!

It's gay! Hooray! It's 1 am and I am officially done!
I love it, you're one of the best hnkna fan fiction writers out there! I love you! Not getting personal of course...great, you made me perverted. I'm still young, lol!
Now, I must see the triquel! Make one please! : )
Goodnight.
xxXMythiaXxx

Um... I've always wanted to ask but... who was that red head and silvery-eyed man? (o_O)

Did you plagiarize chapter 5, that story was from another fabric. Dude, did u get permission to take the story as your own a? You didn't even get the author her credit