Nicely done.

Good.

You mispell kain name its cain

I really loved this story! It was amazing!

Yay! I found another story about Ren and Kyoko as the Heel Siblings! I'm so happy! ( insert happy dance here). You made my day! Thank You!

Oh! 3

I loved it. I would've adored more, but I agree that this was a good stopping point.

*Meltmeltmelt*
Yes! Kanae and Lory are involved!

I loved this... especially the flirting!
And Kyoko got her dream modeling job!

I loooove this.

Oooh how I love this!

Well kyoko, "hungry" is one way to describe it...he is certainly some type of hungry...Now you just need to figure out which.. me: :) kyoko: ?:( huh? Ren: . no. thank you, but I don't need another yashiro. Me: who says I'm yashiro? *is suddenly in costume* lory: Ren, how could you? *tears eyes* how could you forget about me? *evil look* I'll just have to take revenge :{D hehehe...

Liked it, but liked the first two chapters the most, the third chapter I couldn't quite reconcile myself to the 'round one etc', it felt a little - I dunno - out of place? I liked the confession bit and Kyouko's reaction. Kanae was amusing _ and of course the ending was sweet, I just wish there was one more chapter of when they finished the film, or something! lol (I'm never happy - one story's too long, the other not long enough! . )

Loved the story. Wish she would have said the words back, but I guess with kiss, that was her way of saying without saying. Thanks for the story!

Whoa tat was short... ONE MORE CHAPTER, EPILOGUE? Plzzzz -puppy eyes-