Well then... From what has been seen in the other (chapters?) this behavior is expected of Tai Lung but wow. So much emotional tension..

Um...I had something to say a second ago...very different this was...very interesting

Funny thing, because I really like it. The story, althought have a little in common with the canonical history, it has very well described characters. It's a pity I couldn't find good Tai Lung's ff. Until now, actually.

I'm really happy to read something like this. It is full of emotions, of desire. Interesting, I won't say twice. I can be not a fan of those... pairings, but here, you have my word: I really like it. Not because of rough sex, but because of all the rest;)

(ah, 'kay, sex was fine too...)

Wow, I was not expecting that to be so brutal!

This was very well written. This is one of my favourite pairings. Good job (:

Please make a squeal for this, please.

I really like the pairing you've used here! The story was very well written (loved the imagery) and I would just love to see more. Good Job!

hhmm, very nice . its nice to see something a tad bit different for once. there arent many stories that and in something like what you did here. i liked this allot, you put it all together very well, nice work.