OH MY GOSH YOU PUT MRS. SHORT IN YOUR STORY! You're the best! Seriously you're the best! Only a true friend would take their friend's scary English teacher and make her into a creepy old lady in their fanfiction story! Please write more chapters about Mrs. Short, that was hilarious! :D

I definitely agree with KityPryde about the best line in the story: "I ALWAYS KNEW JENNY WAS A NO GOOD TOILET LICKER!" :D

Maria's reaction to a Chee marrying a human was perfect, by the way.

I loved all their reactions, actually. "JENNY MARRIED MARCO?"

All your chapters are amazingly funny and this one didn't dissapoint me! :D Write more please!

"I ALWAYS KNEW JENNY WAS A NO GOOD TOILET LICKER!"

XD LOL, best line in the whole chapter.

(jumps up and down with joy) Yay! You're making a story with Jenny! :D She's so awesome. And she married Marco? lol, wonder how that's going to go...