Please update soon! Im begging you"
I love this
Laura :)

My dear friend. What would it take to give you inspiration to update this lovely story?

Love,
Danielle

ive waited over a year to see if there would be a chapter 24...and still nothing:( please keep writing this!3

great story.

my names amber. i am IN LOVE with this story! i even bought the movie death sentence but honeslty like this WAY better and u shuld rlyyyyyyyyyyy make this into a movie or even a book when its done! i wuld loveee to see wat all the characters would like. like billy or sarah! PLEASEEEE! i also cant waitttt for the next chapter and pleaseeeeeeeeee finish or post it soon! my world revolves around thiss and i am sooo curious about wats going to happen next!:)

ive never been one 2 read but 1 of my best friends was reading fan fictions so i decided to look them up and i found yours which im glad i did! this is the 1st story ive evr read 2 the point where i am sooo addicted and into this story! i culd nvr imagine this being so good i wish it was a movie! but cant wait for the nxt chapter! :D

OMFG.

What the BLOODY HELL am I supposed to do with that ending?

Scream a bunch. then pant. OH and then have a frikin heart attack.
Props to Emily though. There would be NO WAY in hell I would sit in a car when my friends and boyfriend were being bombarded in the distance. I might shit myself in the process, but I'd be doing exactly what she did.

JEEEZ this is going to be a mess.

Woman...I need more. Need. Not 'omg I can't wait'. NO. I NEED MORE.

:D Happy face happy face. I must say, your little moment of smut was aweeesome, darling! AHHH. I love these two and I love the bit about Billy sleeping. It's just...heh. It's perfect. He would sleep hard, just like he lived. :) LOVE IT. Can't wait for more, as usual.

I thought I had feels before...I think I may have just died a little inside. Oh my god girl. Oh my god. ...I literally dont know what else to say. You need to continue this! or I'll just sob until the end of time. Darlin, I love this story. I LOVE IT. now I'm going to be an impatient child and demand more!

THIS CHAPTER. i literally cried at some point. I believe it was when Megan said Billy had cheated on her. I lost my shit. I will have a hell of a time finding the pen I threw across the room. Seriously, I was livid and crying and just angry. and then JOEY'S FACE. omg. I was like... *trembling lip* that's about it.
But it all ended up okay in the end...but her story? WHAT?! now im intriguedddd.
Btw, "Try me, Darley." ohhhh honey. you had my stomach tingling with that one. ;)

*facedesk* that's all i can muster after that ending. dear god. and this whole mysterious ex thing? oh holy crap. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME!?

ermegerd. this is just too cute for words. i love how he is still the same grumpy billy but he's got this whole relationship thing going JUST RIGHT. seriously, you found the magic formula and I am LOVING IT.

woman. this. entire. chapter.
Okay, so the conversation between Sarah and Billy was goddamn brilliant. Like, perfect. I'm not even joking, I was so thrilled with how things went. She wasn't a push over and he wasn't too mushy. It was perfect. Gotta say, the way you opened it up gave me goosebumps. "You smell like someone else." I mean, whoa. I was like, stunned into silence as I read that entire piece. You have made me into a fan of YOURS m'dear. This is drop dead amazing.
And that bit with "You're cute." was awesome. I was grinning and giggling. Oh Billy. he could be cute, given the right moment. ;)

"That's what they do... Billy's whores." - there. are. no. words. JOSEPH MOTHERFUCKING DARLEY. im livid.

Love this chapter. it was a lot of back and forth, but it worked. it felt like an episode of a tv show, honestly. and i love that. I feel bad for Megan...because i mean...sheesh. She's a bitch for being mean to Sarah, but still. her feelings have just been railroaded. le sad face.

AHHH i love the FEELS.

"He said he'd kidnap me and force me to watch Heco's sex tapes until my eyes bled." -Your sense of humor kills me. And the idea of Heco having porn...I'm intrigued...and sort of..inspired? -uh oh-

He was so busy it bored him to death. - this is just plain amazing. just...nailed it.

This whole chapter: megan being pissed, billy being hot, tommy and emily, billy being hot, bodie giving hugs, oh and billy being HOT. LOVE. Next chapterrr!