Actually, Harry/Clark would have been wonderful. Always thought Harry would love an older, powerful man to protect and love him, so he didnt have to be strong himself - or only sometimes.

Is Harry supposed to be that dumb? I mean the majority of what he says is either "Err", exclamations at something stupid he's done or repeating what someone else told him. The rest is brooding, entertainment really needs less shitty male characters.

An entire society wouldn't have developed around magic if it was so temprory in effect. Honestly not only have you set magic to be pathetically ineffectual but given that on top of that Harry is utterly incompetent at everything I can't imagine we'll ever see magic doing anyting remotely as impressive as technology or other super powers in this story.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Bellatrix Lestrange would be her aunt. Andromeda Tonks was the sister of Narcissa Malfoy and Bellatrix Lestrange

I’d just like to say that your writing style is absolutely brilliant and that your story is one I’m constantly engaging with. The plot is fantastic and the characters are amazing well-written.

However, I would also like to say something in response to the Q&A you wrote at the end of Chapter 7. At one point, you said that Hogwarts is one of the safest magical schools in the world and that the only bad things that happen are because of Voldemort’s agents infiltrating the school or the Sirius Black and Peter Petigrew incident dueing 3rd Year. I may have misinterpreted what you have written, but it seems to me that you are saying that none of the bad things that have happened at Hogwarts have any importance when questioning the relative safety of the school when compared to other magical schools around the world all because of the fact I

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I am happy to have read this

Thanks for a very enjoyable read! Hope all is well in your world, and I look forward to checking out your other works. Thanks again!

'and the group began singing "Happy Birthday," a song Harry, Ron and Hermione, as wizards and a witch from Britain, hadn't heard before.'

Seriously haha, Hermione and Harry both brought up in the non magical world don't know the Happy Birthday song, even if Wizards like Ron hadn't heard of it which I very much doubt, it is the most recognized song in the English language.

This was a hell of a ride. This is definitely going in my C2 community.

I like how you wrapped that up!

Ok...couple more thoughts:

1) You have a ton of plots running simultaneously and honestly it's getting to be a bit much.

I get breaking from cannon, but Malfoy and Co. were out of Azkaban by summer of 1996, which was a major point of contempt Harry had for Draco and for all purposes the Malfoys Sr. were prisoners in their own home b/c of Lucius' failure in the DoM.

With Luthor being sent to Azkaban, with Harry going to Potter's Field, with them suddenly coming back to Hogwarts, with Superman going all dark and meanie, and so many characters and plots "springing up" the over-arching plot...I don't know what the big picture is anymore.

Harry's mentioned several times Voldemort is insignificant b/c of his knowledge and abilities post Dark Dimension, and several chapters ago there was hope of Dumbledore being Cured of the Withering Curse...where's that going?

Luthor was a fun foil for the first few chapters, but the idea Voldemort would work with a muggle...its completely counter to his character, and would undermine his authority with the Death Eaters.

That's one point I can't get past even though I see what you're trying to do...but it hurts the story, in my honest opinion, more than helps.

Luthor wasn't this obsessive until he'd lost Braniac and was seeking to have him restored. Luthor as you're portraying him has become less genius supervision and more cheesy opportunist.

This isn't even to mention the sudden focusing of the story on Harry's love life, and not dealing with his PTSD from being a victim of human trafficking and likely rape (if we're going to be honest) about Clea.

You spent entire chapters proving how difficult it was to get Harry and the gang transferred, but suddenly they can just decide to go back to Hogwarts? that Potter's Field Academy taught superior magic, which they were able to learn adequately in a single semester?

I get wanting to keep the trio together, but this fic was one of the few believable fics where Harry went to a different school and in the span of a few paragraphs everything you'd spent so much time going through, and which the reader had become invested in, fell apart.

it's a bit frustrating.

Now...that being said...this story is absolutely amazing. It's gripping, reads well, and is so engaging I'm fucking mad over stupid things!

You have an amazing talent, and apart from my bitching, I hope you continue to express yourself in this medium at which you seem to be an old hand and pro.

Your characters have so much life, vibrancy, and credibility it's hard not to become invested in them as you've made them your own.

I don't want Harry and Clark to "swap back." I don't want Harry and the gang to go back to Hogwarts and Britain because of the hope for a better life they'd get from Potter's Field.

Your story is very entertaining and I appreciate your taking the time to share it with us...but we need a version where an Older Harry and Clark explore those scenes a bit differently than you've written!

Can you imagine Superman, newly Married to the Master of Death and potential Sorcerer Supreme HP finding out he's got a kid from his "awkward years"... or Harry finding out he's a stepdad? _

Hilarity would ensue.

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"Clark come get your kid...he's literally bouncing off the walls," Harry screamed having noticed the four lb. bag of sugar had disappeared from the cupboard and only tattered remains existed tucked discretely into the trash.

"Can't hun! Luthor's going to detonate a nuke at Yellowstone...gotta fly," Clark called suddenly from the kitchen with the sound of a chair hurriedly pushing from the table as his image blurred and Harry, exasperated, turned to the super-sugared tyke squealing in joy as he bounced from corner to corner of the massive den.

"Damn it Clark!" Harry cried.

"I thought Superman's Colors were red, white, and blue but there's a yellow streak down his back a mile wide," Harry said shaking his head.

"Look's like I get to be the wicked stepmother...again," he said with a sigh.

"Sampson! Come down this minute! What did I tell you about getting into the sugar," he growled levitating himself up to be eye level with the super baby.

"Not the mama!" the baby screamed as laser beams shot from his eyes and he flew away.

Just then, Kreacher popped in, saw the destruction, and popped away muttering about vacation days from poofters and their crazy devil spawn.

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You'd do it justice though...I'm sure. :-)

So I'm a bit lost by this.

I mean I get the plot and what you're doing, but for the Hogwarts kids to blow off their promise to the Weasleys ... and be so cavalier about it without letting Molly know they wouldn't be by?

Maybe American school was bad for them, it seems to be fundamentally affecting their ability to keep their word.

I'm hoping you're going to resolve this oddness with Clark soon and return either Dr. Strange as SS of Earth or let someone competent, dare I speculate Harry, as the new SS of Earth & Dark Dimension without destroying his faith in Clark.

Would the ring that infused clark with Dark Dimension Energy have anything to do with his behavioral and personality changes?

Has Dormamu corrupted him that way b/c of Magik?

So what consequences will Phineas have for bringing Clea in as a teacher?

She’s obviously a villain now. If Harry defeats her does he become Sorcerer Supreme of either Earth or the dark Dimension?