AWWWW MAAAAAAAAN! those two are just thinking of EXCUSES for why they can't fall in love. EXCUSES! but it makes for a really good fanfic. are you going to continue?

Love this, and i agree, i think you could pick it up from the finale.

I really like the way you did this. I was scared that at first it would be a little annoying, but it really does show their true feelings. I don't think you got too out of character, so please continue!

I love these chapters. They're really.. deep.

Not that I don't like the Lips chapter.. but I think you should retry it. It would kind of mix up the story a little.. I know There's not really a story line or anything, but using the Season Finale kiss scene as a base would work.

You could have Damon talk about the kiss and Elena (if you do, don't forget that he has to realize the kiss felt familiar from somewhere, stupid katherine..) and Elena could talk about his lips and how she has an urge to kiss them

No worries if you don't like my suggestion.. it's up to you. I'm just offering some ideas. :)

loved these liitle snippets...lookinf forward to more

This fic just goes to show you don't have to have a lot of words to make a huge impact. LOVE IT!

This is beautiful so far, the chapeters are short but so well written that they portray the emotions, appearances perfectly in so little words. Kudos :)

Nice continuation.

You should DEFINATELY make this a whole series. It could go anywhere if you think about it. Hair. Clothes. Lips. e.t.c

YOU HAVE NO EXCUSE NOT TO UPDATE!

This is really nice written, I'm really obsessed with the dance scene. I think I watched it at least a hundred times...and as for right now I'm listening to "All I Need"
Their gazes are so intense and you've managed to put it down in words pretty well:)

I can't get enough of the dance so I would love it if you continued this story. And the last lines from each of them were great, they really say everything about what they fear in their relationship.

LOVED IT!

Omg love this so much.

I've watched that dance scene soo many times. it's actually given me chills how 'perfect' it was. your writing is fantastic!

this is amazing!

yeah, elena is def. becoming a katherine. but then i think she's too sweet and "innocent" to have to choose between them. so i think what'll happen is that stefan and damon will end up fighting it out instead of katherine calling all the shots. i enjoyed this more than your other chapter. mostly because the last lines were so bone chilling. i really like your writing. i think a bit too much to be healthy.

i like it! WHat are you gonna do next? I think it should continue... maybe you could do something like heart rate and both damon and elena could notice her heart speeding up, and damon should think like if he had a heart! :) good job!