Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This was going really well... Till it stopped. ;)

After five years I guess I'll file this alongside the other really great stories that just never finished...really hope you come back to it someday

This is good, real good.

Love your style. I like how you combine present and memories of the past without confusing the reader. I also hope you finish this story someday.

The whole "recruited at Standford" thing's been done to death, but I really really like how it's been used in this story. It falls within expectations as far as plot goes, but the writing is really quite well-done. There's detail, there's personality, and mood shifts between scenes (like going from Chuck watching the camera to Orion's point of view) are attention grabbing.

Keep writing!

Hey. I like this.

I suppose I should echo Frea's plea of ""please,please finish this fic!". Truthfully, I remember reading it before and I'm even more intrigued by these characters, particularly Jill. It's a great story.

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Damn, hate just burned through this story, and have to say it ranks as one of my all time favorite Chuck fics. Thought the characters were really well put together, and I really enjoy the growing distance between Chuck and Jill... Sadly this almost makes me wish them both well and Chuck/Sarah be damned. Blasphemy I know, but you write Chuck and Jill's love really well. In the actual show I often wondered if Jill looked for a way out, it was tied to her family, but she never seemed happy to be Fulcrum. I wonder if a more confidant Chuck might end up being her confidant.

Either way, I hope you find your muse to continue this work. I would love to see chapters 15

wicked chapter m8, one of the best chuck fic starts i have read. really like bryce's though on everything and his motivations ect...

Awesome stuff. Looking forward to more. Really looking forward to more.

*sad, pleading look* Please, sir, I want some more.

Wow, I never would have figured out that this was a new chapter to a story if you hadn't told us! Thanks for letting us poor fools know so we wouldn't be left wondering. :D

But seriously, I loved it, even if it did make my heart ache. All parts of this chapter showed interesting insights into each character's state of mind as their jobs make them question their choices and their integrity. I look forward to seeing how they navigate through their issues, and what becomes of them.

Thanks for the update the story is great.. the writing on the other hand is fantastic. You are truely gifted. Thanks