"As you wish" seems like SUCH a Tony thing to adopt.

Awww...This was sort of adorable. Okay, a lot adorable. And sweet. And cute. SQUEENESS!

By the way, I am a HUGE Princess Bride fan, and my first reaction when Tony said "As you wish," was, "He said he loved her!"

Okay, over the top meltiness over now. I need to get more sleep...

I loved it! :)

OMG x 3! I can't believe I haven't read this before now- I stumbled across it on someone's favorites list and love it. So refreshingly- honest, for Tony and Ziva stories. I mean they are both so closed about their feelings and so why do we think they would all of a sudden say everything they never said before? So I love your characterization of their actions. Thought it was well-written and interesting.

this is sosososoossoososssooooooooo adorable! love every word of it?

I loved this story. Absolutely, one-hundred percent loved it. Now I've gotta know, though, was that line Tony said "Especially me. Mostly me,"..."Only me,"..."Forget McGee." a referance to The Road to El Dorado? Because after I read that, I thought 'that sounds SO familiar' so I read it over and once the name Miguel came out instead of McGee and it was a eureka moment. If that was a The Road to El Dorado referance, kudos. You rocked that. I mean, seriously, awestastic. If it wasn't, you should make yourself a big bowl of awesomesauce with all that extra awesome you're producing, because you made me Google an insanely large phrase. Also, as I said before, the story was absolutely phenomenal. Great job.

that was great loved it

OMG! This was awesome! I hope you know who this is, since I don't have a user name, but I felt like creeping on your fanfic account...

that was so beautiful & achingly tender. aww.

that was so hot and cute and totally in character!

no over the top vomit-inducing confessions of love, awesome!

in my opinion those stories make it feel like the only way they relate to the show is by using the characters names..

but in this, their names could have been entirely different and i still would have gone: Wow this is SO Tony and Ziva!

Great great great! Just...wonderful!

no need to continue, its perfect how it is!

well done!

:P

xXtegannXx

That was the best oneshot about them getting together that I have ever read. It was completely in character, sweet, romantic, and there was no vomit worthy confessions of love. Perfectly written. It would be great if this really happened. (One can only hope) Anyway, great job.

-h.e.r.

This was amazing.

NCIS is one of my favourite programmes.

I completely root for Tony/Ziva.

This was very well written.

I loved the inner conciousness of Tony.

Almost like his inner chatter.

The emotions are well conveyed.

Brilliant.

I love it.

Kerr X.

really great story :) loved it loved it loved it

I can't even begin to explain how amazing this is. So perfect, I love it. I don't want to ruin how amazing it is by trying to sum up how much I love it with too many words - which I'm starting to do. So I'll leave this nice and short;

AMAZING. INCREDIBLE. LOVE.

It was very sentimental and realistic and sweet! Well done!