Nice story. Very nice. I liked the boat idea too!

that was sweet:)

Yaaaay~! I like it~! x333 Gold so emotional at the moment. He needs some lava chips. OwO it was a good thing he didn't touch yellow's butt, though, considering she was sexy that night. LOL.

Anyway, I just saw a "his" written as "is" but I can't find it... anymore... -w-;; sorry. I like the story telling-so slow and calming. ;)

Nice Work~!333

Glameow girl

Well it's in the story xD It's not Sapphire since I hadn't mentioned her~ And I can't give direct spoilers; But the girl loved by the one she loves in the story is very subtle, it's not in the manga though xD-made her own hints.

Y'know, I'm kinda wondering about what Green said:

"The lucky girl was lucky enough to get someone who loves her back. I guess Blue was right with her advice. I was too late."

The only girl who loved someone who actually loved her back was Sapphire... so Green likes Sapphire? Aww, that would be so cute, yet weird, yet kinda crazy, but I'm a half-Brunettshipper (GaryXMay) so I really wouldn't mind XDD

Quite good, the only thing I have aganst it, is that Gold is actually the second wealthiest Dexholder, he's not as rich as Platina, but still quite well off. I can't really see him needing money.

Other then that, a nice little oneshot.

"Me? I'm rowing boats!"

First of all I want to say I really found that comment funny for some odd reason, don't know what it was but I bursted out in laughter in I read it, I have a weird sense of humor.

Anyways I thought this was a good fanfic, Gold and Yellow were written well I think. I also liked the plot I hope to see more! -