Reviews for The Bloodline - The Awakening |
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zikashigaku chapter 50 . 5/21 Aaah this episode also gave me feels. The first seasons were such a hardship for Dean to stop hating himself and get out of the obedient soldier mode John had raised him in. I really hated John during those seasons I just wanted someone who to hug him and tell him he was loved. Dx |
zikashigaku chapter 49 . 5/17 She’s an angel?! Oooh I had suspicions but oof still surprised me hahaha. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and the AU plot line coming up! So excited! |
ihavebetterthingstodo chapter 1 . 4/16/2019 this seems like a great book, i truly love the idea you have with it. however, the writing needs a lot of work the dialogue isn't as smooth as it should be. the punctuation, grammar, etc need some brushing up on. i saw a lot of mistakes. i would also suggest finding better ways to transition from diary to flashback because they came off as a bit sloppy especially when you would do one short paragraph of the diary entry and then a really long flashback. try maybe evening them out a little more and also maybe limiting them each chapter because with the two or three flashbacks we got in this chapter we bounced around quite a bit and it was a tad offputting. |
Guest chapter 48 . 3/2/2015 Aww love it! Can't wait for the next update! |
Guest chapter 48 . 3/4/2014 Please write a sequel, this is my favourite deanoc story ever :D xx |
inspiration101 chapter 47 . 9/15/2013 love it! i know its been like foreeeeeeverr but pleeeease update! xx |
moonandstars chapter 47 . 12/18/2012 I love this story, its like my second time reading it even thought it isn't finished yet, which I'm sad to hear will be soon. Can't wait to your next chapter! |
JannineKelly chapter 46 . 11/6/2012 Awesome Chapter Dude! I just love Dean and Josie together! They're kickass. Keep up the great work! :) |
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 47 . 11/5/2012 i cant believe how long it took me to find this story and this story is so addicting i read the whole thing from the start and i finished it in 2 days and now im so sad hearing that the story will end soon and i just cant believe that and searching thought this whole fan faction site i found this story and it was just what i was looking for and i am so sad hearing that it will end so soon :( but this i will tell you with honest that is the best fan-fiction i have ever read in my whole life and i am so sad hearing that its going to end so soon for me i did not even have time to enjoy that waiting and the anticipating |
ginkies chapter 47 . 11/4/2012 Wow dude this was great! I've loved this story since the begining and yeah it's sad that it's going to end. But I really hope you continue with your own! With how this chapter ends I really wonder how the story is going to end? Can't wait to read the update! I hope things are better for you dude, you know I'm here if you need me! |
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012 Best ever this story is going to be the end of me |
Lucy colt chapter 47 . 11/3/2012 Damn dude! You are such a drama queen! The first part was so damn sweet and for a moment, I thought they will talk, but then they fought again. Can't wait for more! ) |
dandy44 chapter 47 . 11/3/2012 I loved the chapter and I really really missed the story Can't wait for the update please make that sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooon and I wanna know about the sudden cousin so make the update sooner than later |
deangirl72 chapter 47 . 11/2/2012 awesome ...awesome...awesome... i missed this story so much and dean and josie too ...and i missed u too...great chapter and i m still wid u babe...;) |
Guest chapter 46 . 10/16/2012 AWWW love it! Can't wait for the next update! :D |