Reviews for The Bloodline - The Awakening
zikashigaku chapter 50 . 5/21
Aaah this episode also gave me feels. The first seasons were such a hardship for Dean to stop hating himself and get out of the obedient soldier mode John had raised him in. I really hated John during those seasons I just wanted someone who to hug him and tell him he was loved. Dx
zikashigaku chapter 49 . 5/17
She’s an angel?! Oooh I had suspicions but oof still surprised me hahaha. I’m looking forward to the next chapter and the AU plot line coming up! So excited!
ihavebetterthingstodo chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
this seems like a great book, i truly love the idea you have with it. however, the writing needs a lot of work the dialogue isn't as smooth as it should be. the punctuation, grammar, etc need some brushing up on. i saw a lot of mistakes. i would also suggest finding better ways to transition from diary to flashback because they came off as a bit sloppy especially when you would do one short paragraph of the diary entry and then a really long flashback. try maybe evening them out a little more and also maybe limiting them each chapter because with the two or three flashbacks we got in this chapter we bounced around quite a bit and it was a tad offputting.
Guest chapter 48 . 3/2/2015
Aww love it! Can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 48 . 3/4/2014
Please write a sequel, this is my favourite deanoc story ever :D xx
inspiration101 chapter 47 . 9/15/2013
love it! i know its been like foreeeeeeverr but pleeeease update! xx
moonandstars chapter 47 . 12/18/2012
I love this story, its like my second time reading it even thought it isn't finished yet, which I'm sad to hear will be soon. Can't wait to your next chapter!
JannineKelly chapter 46 . 11/6/2012
Awesome Chapter Dude! I just love Dean and Josie together! They're kickass. Keep up the great work! :)
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 47 . 11/5/2012
i cant believe how long it took me to find this story and this story is so addicting i read the whole thing from the start and i finished it in 2 days and now im so sad hearing that the story will end soon and i just cant believe that and searching thought this whole fan faction site i found this story and it was just what i was looking for and i am so sad hearing that it will end so soon :( but this i will tell you with honest that is the best fan-fiction i have ever read in my whole life and i am so sad hearing that its going to end so soon for me i did not even have time to enjoy that waiting and the anticipating
ginkies chapter 47 . 11/4/2012
Wow dude this was great! I've loved this story since the begining and yeah it's sad that it's going to end. But I really hope you continue with your own!
With how this chapter ends I really wonder how the story is going to end? Can't wait to read the update!
I hope things are better for you dude, you know I'm here if you need me!
jenniferwinchester12 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Best ever this story is going to be the end of me
Lucy colt chapter 47 . 11/3/2012
Damn dude! You are such a drama queen! The first part was so damn sweet and for a moment, I thought they will talk, but then they fought again. Can't wait for more! )
dandy44 chapter 47 . 11/3/2012
I loved the chapter and I really really missed the story Can't wait for the update please make that sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooon and I wanna know about the sudden cousin so make the update sooner than later
deangirl72 chapter 47 . 11/2/2012
awesome ...awesome...awesome...
i missed this story so much and dean and josie too ...and i missed u too...great chapter and i m still wid u babe...;)
Guest chapter 46 . 10/16/2012
AWWW love it! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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