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Poor Saix.

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No, I can't figure out the pattern other than zexy is the oldest.

I am endlessly happy that this fic didn't become a Saix/Luxord porno after how great the earlier chapters were.

This fic is a lot more amusing than I would have expected, though the first person voice sounds nothing like Saix. All is forgiven, though, since it was originally published five years after KH2's release and quite a bit after the release of Days, if I remember correctly. The events so far have become my head canon for how Demyx, Luxord, and Marluxia were recruited now, and I'll never be able to look at Xemnas the same way again. Or even Zexion, who I usually have a fondness for.

I really enjoy the concept of this and how the presumably random child personalities of each of the members is not, in fact, a blatant parody of their adult characters, but has a (vaguely) scientific purpose. One minor problem I might point out is that Xemnas and Axel both seem to be very mature for a four and five year old. Zexion gets a free pass on this for being Zexion, of course. However, I can understand that this is likely for the sake of amusing situations. Speaking of which, you have a talent for wit and deadpan humour that has left me howling with laughter multiple times while reading this, particularly Saix and Zexion's relationship and Saix's plushie genocide campaign. That in particular came along with the revelation that Xemnas must have already had a stash of plushes in his office.

The references to other games in the series also help set this fic in the KH universe, rather than just be a collection of familiar faces going through the motions of sitcom family life. I particularly noticed the reference to Terra, Aqua, and the Land of Departure during Saix's visit to Xemnas's secret office. That made me sad, and I also wonder if the intention is to ship Terra/Aqua or Xemnas/Saix. With the additional revelations provided by 3D, you should have plenty of fodder for more chapters.

As a slight admonition/encouragement: you just have a few days left to write before you're back to Monday! Then you can complete the plot. Well, what plot there is/was. As you continually ask for additional ideas for chapters in previous author's notes, I'll do my best with a few concepts.

As a bit of a non-shipper, I'd like to see more of Axel and Xemnas' rivalry. Perhaps they could both invade Saix's bed at the same time? Xemnas' delusions are also quite interesting, and I'm going to take a wild guess and say that they're named after a couple of Latin elements. I'm sure Saix could glean something from finding out that Xemnas knows Ventus as well. Zexion seems to be on the verge of discovering the actual reason the other Organization members are discussing an 'allergy,' and that could help or hinder his relationship with Saix and the others. With the revelations from 3D, Vexen might produce a theory that the children are still full Nobodies, as they must be simply child versions of the adults, but the Heart they were developing as Nobodies is more manifested in Nobodies who are not actively suppressing it. This could cause... complications in the future, to put it lightly, and might connect well to why Axel found it acceptable to kill Vexen during Chain of Memories, especially when Saix has become more of a vessel for Xehanort than his own person. This concept only works if you intend to link this fic back into the continuity of the series, of course.

I get what you say when you point out that coming up with ideas for this is hard. Hopefully some of the ideas are workable, if you're even working on this fic at all anymore. It's perfectly understandable if you would rather not, of course; I've moved on from fics in the past on multiple occasions.

Incasa

This is fantastic. Any chance of an update soon?

Hi! Such an awesome story. I would've reviewed earlier but it was 4:00 AM so I had to get some sleep. Anyway, this is the first Saix story I've ever read where Saix isn't paired up with Xemnas. Even though it implies yaoi, thanks to Xemnas, I don't see a yaoi pairing happening anytime soon. The story is funny, the character act realistic and story is thickening by minute. Please update soon.

I just can't pick a favourite line in this chapter. They're all my favourites. And Xemnas is still the cutest little world destroyer ever.

I like how Luxord is still badass without even being there :)

Great chapter!

Oh my god. This is just absolutely and incomparably hilarious! The comedic timing is brilliant, the characters are humorous while staying true to themselves (Zexion gets bonus points in this category), and the pacing is perfect. There are so many ways to do a story like this incorrectly, but you managed to hit all the right notes and make something great.

Also, I have no idea what Saix is going on about - little Xemnas is freaking adorable!

OMG! I totally loved this story. The writing was excellent with a definite sense of personality, the dialogue as funny as hell and everything was perfect. Awsome job:) I love Saix in this though, personally, I feel bad he has to put up with so much crap. Great story:)

Go Saix.

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tis making me puke rainbowshonhonhon

I keep imagining them as adorable children,especially Lexy!

Gah I was hoping to hold off reading this until at least 2 more chapters came out but I couldn't help it! And yes, Luxord has got to be the most handsome man, next to Ansem the Wise, to ever be spawned from Kingdom Hearts. Or it could be the whole British blonde thing. Either way, looking foward to a new chapter!

Ah, a rather peaceful day when daddy's around, eh?

You are pretty good at the details of baby-sitting, have you gone through one?

Perhaps we could have a view on how Xemnas is trying to get Saix's attention, while the said attention is on Luxord; or maybe a duo on a munny mission like Vexen and Zexion (Lexaeus "accidentally" joins in by means of smuggling himself in a bag etc).. I'm no good when comes to creative ideas (meaning "Let's just wait for Lily to update the chapters") :)

Hopefully there will be a divine light shines on you so that you could get some ideas on the chapters, just like how it notices Saix's plea. I'm putting this on alert, keep it up!

"…He's on my lap."

Omg I died.