I opened this story because of the Jane/Alec (because it's so in the movies, and it's so hilarious.) but I review for the Felix/Demetri - because they're totally also fucking in the movies. It's so glorious, I'm completely obnoxious while watching any of them. I can't stand it.

This is both creepy, disgusting, weird, and downright WRONG.
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such a great story. i really enjoyed your writing. this couple is too underrated.

8D Serves Aro right. I would love to see the two set him in his place actually.

Loved it you sould write more like this.

Carly

Wow...this was perfect! This is what vampires are supposed to be - twisted and amoral and disturbing. I usually run away from incest like the plague in most fandoms and this as usualy creeped me out but it is as it should be. It is strangely appropriate and I seriously got 'couple' vibes from them both in the books and movie too. Great story!

P.S: I love your snarking of the Illustrated Guide on youtube :D

Yaaay! Jane's not a pentulant five-year-old like Meyer made he out to be and Alec has characterization. I love this Alec -"Then put me in my place," he grinned- and -giving Felix a nasty grin.- made me grin.

YES! This is soooooooooooooooo fucking purrrrfeccct! I have been moved into a crazed frenzy of some sort, and that's a good thing. Very Very Very well done. Well written. And it TOTALY fits right into the plot! I was a littl disapointed to see that there was only ONE Jane x Alec fic in english, but that's ok, because it was fucking awesome enough to last me forever! AMAZING! Keep up the fucking sweet work!

i always thought jane & alec were into the freaky deaky. i always thought the guards were gay too.

but sm is not enuff of a freak to seriously imply it to the masses or is she ? it would be brilliant knowing kids & others are reading this meanwhile she is problly getting turned on by the thought of everyone reading it thinking one thing when in her dirty twisted vamp obsessed mind she means another. hmm...is it finished? u should finish it.

Hmmm... I like it. It's actually exactly what I was looking for when I searched stories with Jane... well done. You're a good writer.

Wonderful characterizations, I loved it ;D

Nice. I love it!

I really like this story...I'm a bit abashed to admit that I do, considering the pairing. But it fits, and it makes sense. Of course, they would turn to each other. They're frozen as young teenagers; all they've got is each other. And Alec is ever Jane's protector even as he's her lover. When you remember that there is no way that Jane can have a child from this...well, it doesn't seem so wrong.

Perhaps, I may get up enough courage to write that pairing myself from reading your story. Thank you for writing it.

Woah, this was... perfect. In every way.

Love the idea of them together... I would rather them not brother and sister though / but for some reason even with the knowledge of them being related this chemistry works between them. Interesting. I really like this ). Well done!