I love it

Wow, that was amazing. So much emotion in just a one-shot. The idea is one

Darn, you took my idea! (Joking!) I was actually going to write an AU fanfiction with this sort of idea, but I like yours better. It's very well-written with wonderful flow and dialouge to keep the reader interested and realize what fate befell Sakura.

I love how you opened and ended this piece. All of it was just one unified piece of writing, which really expressed the realationship depicted so far in the manga. Rinne was guilty and honourable. Sakura was very easy-going and accepting. I thought they were both in character and I actually really enjoyed reading this.

I think it's now my favourite Rin-ne one-shot out there. Excellent, short, sweet and angsty. It's very lovely.

Wish you put in a kiss, though. ;D

Aw it's so beautiful...yet so sad..._

I really wouldn't have thought of something like this, even though it's a simple concept. i'm really glad you did this and executed it so well! the thing that i also appreciate (and find surprising) is that this completely makes sense. since RINNE is a really early series, it's pretty hard to write fanfiction that doesn't impede on the canon story line. this is completely imaginable within the series (though hopefully it doesn't happen, haha) and such a good idea. of course, it is sad which is not really a general feeling the manga gives off, but you certainly made it work well!

aw wish that you couldve added more to the story. Maybe have her go on the wheel of reincarnation, and then have rinne freez his time or something that stops him from ageing...and then they meet! that would've been very kool, but its you story. good job! i enjoyed reading it.

U killed Sakura ? Omg i dont believe u ! *cries* i think Rinne might never forgive himself if Sakura dies...poor him. Oh well, it'so sad but nice story though. U should write more (but with happy ending plz!)

I just woke up in the middle of the night because I remembered that I forgot to review this! X3

This was a pretty good oneshot; I must admit, I wasn't drawn in by the summary, but by the title. It made me wonder too much NOT to check it out. Glad I did :]

I'll be looking out for that "happy" oneshot ;) for now, I need sleep.

~Z...