I'm slightly worried that this I enjoyed this so much. It's perversely amusing, and my new favourite story.

I normally read teeth-rotting USUK fics but I really loved this one. The imagery I get from your words felt too real and gave me goosebumps (whew!). Imagine trying to kill yourself again and again just to get away from your nightmare. I'm just wondering why England didn't try killing America in the first place and escape :3 Still, your story's wonderful! Thanks!

Oh my god
Oh
My
God
This really isnt what I should read
What am I going to do
I can't stop thinking about this oh no what am I going to do I'm going to fail my exams oh no no no no
And the Albion thing
WHY
WHY MUST YOU INCLUDE ALBION
WHYYYY
IM UPSET ABOUT ALBION
*sobs and fails exams*

Oh for the love of god...
This is not something I should read at 2 AM before my last final.
It really isn't.

Wow angst... Sequel!

It's these kinds of stories that just... I gasped and shook my head so many times through. It was incredibly disturbing, disgusting, but to me this story was somewhat of a... relief. After reading another story about America kidnapping, one in which nobody ever questions him and if they do they're never believed, one where America doesn't even see the bad and never cries at what he is doing... well, this is somewhat of a relief, even though it is far from.

I wonder why I continue to read these stories... they do make interesting reads, however, indeed.

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr *rage fit* wth?! sorry sorry its ok its ok

oh my, it's like a circle. I wonder how albion/england met Alfred again though, bet the others were horrified. XD

This was a wonderful story and I really hope you continue writing more fics like this in the future.

Oh...my...
That was so twisted, and dark...Great job!
Just...wow.
The end was especially creepy o.O

Is it bad to like this fic?

I love your style of writing. It's just- I don't even know how to put it into words. The whole thing was a bit confusing though. This is what I understand:

So America kills England at the start, right? (idk why though) England and France are in love with each other. America loves England too and gets jealous/possessive/batshit crazy and kidnaps England or something. (idk about this) England repeatedly tries to kill himself (idk why though... maybe to get away from America? So that America will realize that he doesn't love him that way?) I think France suspects America took England at some point and occasionally drops by to see if he could catch England in America's house. But he doesn't, because America locks England up in his basement on days when people just so happen to visit. (not sure about this) Canada visits and demands that America release England. Because of what America did to England, Britain is in civil unrest. America kills England and tries to kill himself too. I think England somehow 'died' this time around and is 'reincarnated' as this Albion person.

There's quite a bit I don't really understand from this. Maybe I'm just slow. Maybe it's supposed to be like that. I just wanna point it out to you that it is a bit confusing.

And the Albion thing... I've heard to somewhere before... In a USUK fic I think... *le goes to google*

OH! OMGOMGOMG. YOU JUST HAD TO PUT IN THE ALBION THING TO HURT MY FEELS RIGHT. NOT THAT THEY EXIST ANYMORE TTTT

Overall, this is another wonderful fic written by you. As expected. :)

( For people who don't know what Albion is : wiki/Albion )

Just Great!

...Although I don't really understand the thing with Albion?

Aha! Found you!

A few days ago, I started thinking about this story. I can't remember what started the train of thought, but I think the unique premise mixed with the exquisite writing may have had a hand in it. And then I was looking through fanfiction recommendations, and here I am again! I don't believe I'll leave without a review like the time before. This is too chilling and too well-done to ignore.

*shivers*

Albion, like from Fable, right? Wow...Just wow. One of the best and deepest fanfics I've ever read. I loved it.

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