good story i can't wait to read the sequel

you said u posted sequel but i dont see it.

it's like this: Either Bella does nothing, and Brady dies. Or, Bella does what she can, and either Brady dies (as the compatibility between Werewolf and Vampire ontology is in question here) or Brady turns into some form of Vampire. It is a win; even if Brady does die, Bella did all she could. If they had more time, MAYBE Carlisle could have saved him, maybe not. We'll never know.

I'm sorry but this story is crap... Bella is nothing like her normal self at all and I just can't read it. Each chapter looks like it's had 5 mins worth of time spent on it And that includes writing it, not just editing. This story could of had potential but it's severely lacking in yo put it bluntly everything.

are you going to write a sequel ?

I am gone.

Should have Checked your spelling.

Real close to moving on to another story.

Seriously?

Why would he push her away he is as broken as she need each other to fix what is broken in each of them.
Just the guy she met on her first day of school Mike Newman?

I know as soon as they meet the so called parents they would be ..so how long will it take for Jasper to break down her wall?

it is buried not burried.

Let me guess they will invite the girls to their house to meet the parents and mommy will drool all over them and she and the father will claim them as their daughters whether they want to join their coven or not?

Looks like little Eddie won't be in her life to try to obsess over and try to control again unless she is an idiot she can just tell him to walk into a burning pyre and she will be rid of him.

Good story

I love your story! But I have one problem, I can't find the sequel. HELP!