Omg, this is beautiful and sad at the same time. Like, it's so canon? Tamao definitely found out on her own, and she's, well, she's hurt because there it is, the irrefutable proof that Yoh and Anna are together for real, but that's just one of the many emotions she feels. Anna is someone Tamao admires so much, she definitely loves her in a way, so of course she's going to fiercely protect her, the way she learned from Anna herself. And that's without mentioning the Munzer kids that absolutely adore Anna, which is absolutely beautiful too. Yoh is right, they are practice. And speaking of Yoh, damn, he's so collected about this, but I guess that's what I love, when he's serious about something he's really competent like that, and his love for Anna is always serious. Ah, just, this fic made me feel so much, because as much as I love the hopefulness of Yoh's words, it still shows that the situation is far from ideal and that it's really hard and surrounded by darkness, so much Anna even has to lie to the kids and Tamao has to fear for her precious people. Just- this fic is a whole package of emotions, thanks for writing it.

This brought back so many memories of shaman king... i love this one shot!

FINISH the novel please! I know its been a LONG time since you wrote or updated anything...but I LOVE all your SK stories! they are my favorite ones and I love all your Anna STories so PLEASE countinue writiing

Awww... I feel bad for Tamao but she already knows that Yoh really loves Anna and Anna loves him, too...

I liked how Tamao was forceful and didn't flinch when Anna told her to stop staring...

Yoh is so sweet... he's so ready to be a father! :D

Write more Yohna stories! :D

I don't know whether you've started the story, but I WANT TO READ! And...I officially need to start reading the manga again, since I left off somewhere 2/3s of the way through.

Sad, isn't it?

To the story~You are amazing. (yes, literally TO the story) Your author has a wonderful use of words. Not to few, not to many. The same can be said about the use of the differen characters used to make you. As for your plot, well, it was amazing. I certainly had a fun time with you.

Oh. Yeah.

To the author~

Thanks for writing!

:( I feel sorry for Tamao

Yes, I want to read a novel-length story...please give Faust a few appearances, he and Eliza are my favorites.

I think this is really cute. :D

Poor Tamao. She's always in the shadows, isn't she? And she's such a sweetheart. Even if Anna has technically destroyed all her dreams, she still cares for her.

I really love the Yohna moment in here. Simple yet so much meaning behind it.

And I really love the Munzer kids and how you show Anna's motherhood side by her interactions with them. I think I might explore this as well in some of my future fics... :)

i didnt read this because i thought it would be some kind of shoujo-ai or yuri... (talk about judging a fic by its lead characters) hehehe...

but then i read A Cold and Broken Hallelujah.

I also like this one! Gosh! You have made my week because of your many beautiful stories... sigh~

Lovely! All of them acted in character and it's pretty much like Anna to accept her pregnancy in such a cool and calm manner. Love it so much!

Oh, and an Anna novel? Mhm, I will definitely like that. *yum-yum* :D

I FEEL SO SORRY FOR TAMAO! ;_;

But I'm glad she becomes the singer.

ooh! ME! ME! ME!

I wanna read 'em! XD

haha! Redseb and Seyram thought Anna was dead! can't stop laughing at this one! ))

IU think its an oh so great idia!

Mainly cuz its been a while since Ive read something enjoyable -_- Not to tell, BASED ON THE MANGA LOL

Since Ive waited 4 to 5 years for sk to be released again I ned good stories i_i

Im tired of reading zeke, trey LOL LENNY XDD

Cant wait 3

I wanna read them! And the Anna novel, too!

And I loved this story! Especially how Yoh treated her.

So...update? XD