This is really funny! I should do something like this!

It's cute! I like it. Especially how Luke just won't quit. Poor Professor... XD

What good is sitting alone in your room?

It's time for a holiday!

Life is is Cabaret,old chum-

Come to the Cabaret!

Put down the knitting,the book and the broom.

Come hear the music plaaaay!

Life is a Cabaret,old chum,

Only a Cabaret,old chum,

Come to the Caaaaabaaaareeeeeet!

"A genteman doesn't take heed to look in there."

Then we have Pavel being questioned on it.

Nice.

What's funny is that I'm not much older than Luke, and I could take a good guess on what goes on in there.

Ha Layton's face in the 2nd game's creds was to die for!By the way,what does happen in a Cabaret?:S

OMG I died reading this I laughed so hard! And I love that picture you're talking about, the credits one where Luke's attempting to look in, I laugh every time, cuz of course Luke's curious! You did such a good job at this and I'm glad I've seen someone do it (have looked here in a long time, so you're the first one I've known to do this scene). It was very nicely done and I'd love to see more Professor Layton stories from you!

lol randomly funny

; looks like lukes getting a little more curious

eh?

professa red?

lolz

I, too, had a chuckle at the credits scene. It's good to know that SOMEbody got the joke, because my 10 year old sister didn't. The game is rated 7, hmm... You've got a funny story there, poor Layton, and I have a feeling that I should be saying the same about Luke... I like your story!

That boy is in trouble! that was funny, poor Layton, having to try and skirt those questions with a boy as puzzle savvy as Luke has to be a danting(sp?) task, even for the great Hershel Layton

Lol. :) And you included Pavel! Yay!

Cool

He sounds like one of the kids in Outnumbered! Haha! Great story! :D

Haha I liked it