This is good. I wish there were more to read right now, so please, update quickly.

AWESOME STORY SO FAR! Write more soon! :D Lady O.

love it! update soon please!

It's quite alright for your first story. You are fantastic at describing settings and the characters are excellent. Something is missing I won't lie, but I can't exactly put my finger on what. But please continue!

hey! thanks for letting me know you started this. sounds good from the summary and the title's great.

honest? it started off a little book-reporty, but less than half way in the flow gets much! better.

i love that you have them kicking some major butt, not struggling one-on-one and losing.

oh! she can hear them? nice.

oh man, i knew she was going to fall in, but damned if i wasn't still hoping she wouldn't. glad the others got there in time to help harry though.

yah! that was really good, especially for your first fic. i'm absolutely subscribing to see what happens next. great job!

An amazing start, truly gripping. Can't wait to read what you come up with next. Keep up the good work!

mamby-pamby

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Well well, this certainly looks interesting-Hermione's gone and fallen through the Veil too, huh?

But arghh, why did you have to end it there?

Will Hermione recognise Sirius? And has Sirius forgotten everybody but her?

What of Harry? Will they ever see Harry again?

Are Hermione and Sirius trapped inside a new world inside the Veil? Will they ever get out?

Haha, so many questions and so little answers. Like I said, this looks very interesting, I can't wait to read what happens next!