Was that Colin Creevy?

This was a great short story looking at Rodolphus! I don't usually review but I thought this was written well :)

Excellent story. I haven't read too many fanfic's where it shows Rodolphus' side of the story. :D

That was incredible! You give Rudolphus many dimensions and explored them all with a perfect level of detail. The dynamic of his relationship with Bellatrix was particularly interesting, and the conclusion was fabulous. Great job.

First of all congratulations for being one of the final two;)

As for this story it was very nice.

Originality: Rodolphus loves Bellatrix but she is encharmed by the Dark Lord. Why does it has to be like that every time? However, I found his addiction very original, power not Bellatrix. 1 and 1/2 points here.

Prompt: Addiction. definitely in. And in a way that it's implied but understood. And an origianl one. 2 points.

Gramar/Spelling: Perfect. 2 points

Characterization: ellatrix was so much of herself definitely Icould picture Rodolphus like that. 2 points.

Generally: The story flew and was very interesting for the reader (me). 2 points.

9 and 1/2 points from me.

Good Luck.

very nice and interesting fic :)

Hi there. Congratulations on making it this far. This story was fantastic. Great job.

Spelling/Grammar: Perfect. Two points.

The Idea: I loved it, really. How Rodolphus was addicted to having control... but you could have emphasised it a little more...I had to think quite a bit before I realised the addiction you were talking about. Very creative, though! One and a half points.

Story Flow: Oh, it did. I was addicted to it. And by the end, I was feeling what the characters felt...wishing that Bellatrix would love him. Two points.

Characterization: I could so imagine Bellatrix's taunting and you characterised Rodolphus' need for control so well. Two points.

Relationships: Excellent. Rod and Bella's was described perfectly...the controlling nature of their relationship. Fantastic. Two points.

9.5/10