I love how he wants this girl, and still retains his Joker style. And I agree with how he must feel about the rape part, thats how I think he thinks of it too. He wouldnt just have his way with her, thats not his style or message. This was very realistic and how he would handle this situation and feelings.

This is great!

very in character, very interesting.

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So, I really liked this story. I absolutely loved some of the Joker's internal dialogue and thought, and I found the dialogue to be refreshing, witty, and entertaining.

I think it's terrifying to even /imagine/ the situation that you put this OC in. The fact that the Joker found this woman whose car broke down and then led her into a dark alley is absolutely frightening. But then, the woman had a secret of her own, too, which was definitely surprising.

The fact that she made it out alive is really a testament to the fact that she must have been a pretty damn good kisser. I like to think that the Joker isn’t the type of guy who is stimulated by physical beauty, and even though this girl was gorgeous, I think that the Joker let her go with nary a scratch for a different reason, and I think that reason was because she was stronger than other women he had encountered before and he thought it'd be a shame to let that (bravery?) go to waste, perhaps.

Anyway, I absolutely loved this line: ‘Her eyes keep tracin' my scars, fer one – I absolutely hate it when people do that. They're always starin' at the scars, an' when they do that, I don't get eye contact. I mean, really – my eyes are up here, lady!' - I found this particularly amusing because, only seconds before, the Joker was unabashedly staring at this woman’s breasts. Such a hypocrite. Ha.

I also really liked the line where the woman was like “f you” and the Joker responded by saying something like “Oh, would you? Please?” -Haha. (:

Anyway, I liked this fic. Joker one-shots are my favorite, especially when OCs are involved. :D Thanks for writing!

In response to Hailey:

Thanks! One-shot! Never!

loved! more! when?

I love it! I love your Joker; you write him very well, I could practically hear his voice in my head. He's a difficult character to pull off, especially writing from his first person perspective, and you did a wonderful job. I love all his thought processes, and the situation you put him in!

"She snarls something, probably some expression of disgust or another. S'the scars, I bet. Oh, don't feel bad, sweetheart, I loathe 'em just as much as you do, an' probably more – they're on my face, not yers."

One of my favorite few lines, among many others. For a second there, I found the statement kinda heartbreaking in its truth. Dunno, it stuck out for me somehow.

Awesome job :)

This was really great! very well written!