Reviews for Hold The Line
Applesnapp chapter 3 . 4/5/2015
They'd probobly criticize the armor.
Forex chapter 10 . 8/10/2012
really good! update more storys!
Forex chapter 9 . 11/26/2011
UPDATE!
Eat.Sleep.Percy Jackson chapter 9 . 8/26/2011
ooooh! i can't believe you! how could you? this is a cruel, cruel world. you just left it there. you just LEFT IT THERE! -sniffle-

meanie. i really liked it by the way. so is brian guy is a what? human? monster? oh, i know! a-l-i-e-n. xD

but please, please PLEASE update. your a wonderful writer and the story is amazingly written. so please for the love of poseidon, UPDATE! pwease?

hey, where'd Rachel go? did she feel too REJECTED? can you put Calypso in too? not as a evil person but not a completely good character either. to add to the DRAMA! TRAGIC-NESS! (OR WHATEVER.)
ionefoster chapter 9 . 7/16/2011
Whens your next update ! I want know what happens to the a-hole Brian/Zeoles or whatever!
KillerofOranges chapter 9 . 7/7/2011
Woah... I totally love your story! I can't wait for you to update and you better do it soon! :D

- abdhaprincess
Empty Happiness chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
Is that an evil tone or a cheerful tone as you say ," I'M BACK!" ?

Great sequel BTW, looking forward to your next update :)
EPICThunder chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
I luved the ending, and then the authors note, which technically isnt part of the story, but still...
paulinejc chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
KEEP UPDATING PLZZ!
paulinejc chapter 8 . 7/6/2011
i luv ur story! really good :D
snowmanmiike chapter 8 . 12/23/2010
please update!
Daughter Of Poseiden chapter 8 . 9/26/2010
Updateeeee when is hengonna confront her about Brian?
if in another life chapter 8 . 9/22/2010
i love this story, plz update soon!
Backhanded By Tragedy chapter 8 . 8/19/2010
U R AN AMAZING WRIGHTER O MY GODS U R GOOD KEEP WRIGHTING PLEASE
EverafterDemigodGallagherCahil chapter 8 . 8/16/2010
ok, i LOVE this,but girl, you gotta update
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