I really enjoyed this story. Vincent wasn't very vincent like at first but you developed him a little better in following chapters. This was a very original plot too in terms of the other yuffentines I've read. There was very few mistakes and the sentences weren't jumbled or incomprehensible. I look forward to more chapters and further romantic developments!

I can't believe you are giving this up when it's so good

I really love that you have humanized all of Vincent's "demons". I always love fics where I get to hear Chaos. I cannot wait to read more!

:( I almost cried while I was reading what Gilian was thinking. Love this story, I plan to continue reading it right now.

I love how real you portray the characters. They're not all perfect and heroic all the time. I admire that. Thanks for another awesome fic. Hope you update soon.

aww! i love galian, you make him sound so cute!

Very nice story. i had to remind myself in the beginning that it wasn't related to your other works. looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work.

~Shikaku Zetsumei

that ended in a somber note, i have grown very fond of this story i hope you update soon!

Wow. I love this story so far. Vincent is a little OOC, but that's okay because Yuffie is written pretty well. Good job so far. Update soon?

Vincent's concern (and that of his demons) in this is very touching. I really hope that nothing too bad happened to make Yuffie lose her memories - or if it did, Vincent finds out and kicks ass.

Also, the idea of Vincent having hayfever just makes me smile for some reason. :)

At last...another fix...do keep it up would you kindly? I'm dying for more.

I love this chapter, again I feel things are way to black and white a lot of time and the way described how the demons view them selves and how the world views them, PERFECT!

But yeah Yuffie and Vincent just need to do it. When are we gonna get to find out what happened? Vinny's gonna kill the three evil ex's, uh?

Sweetness Great chapter!

Whoaz...dude! that explaination that choas gav was awesome! nd it makes sense, humans only use 10-15%of our actual brain capacity, if we used more, who knows wat we cud comprehend

I enjoyed the chapter, the demon thing was again really awesome..;D Id be happy to read more about it! (:

"Spring just made my nose run and my eyes itch." Though I cant imagine Vincent with a running nose. xDD That sounds cute. xD

Wow! :) Though I dont know that much about FFXII its fun to read the story here. :) Its interesting to read more about the demons inside of Vincent and I like their POV. :D