this was really good, please update soon!

i love it!

Really good job. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

This is good but so sad I can't wait to read more...

Please finish the next chapter

well hurry up and finish it! i am DYING (not literally) waiting!

Im to lazay to review just fudging update

I reviewed the first chapter before, I just wanted to say that I look forward to reading the next chapter because I find this story very intriguing.

I have never been a big Jacob fan-he's done things I simply cannot like, from: kissing Bella forcefully, lying to her and claiming he would kill himself in the newborn fight, but most importantly? He got between Bella and her daughter, I know she was his imprint but it was Bella's baby and for him to think that Bella, Edward, or the Cullens would put her in danger was ridiculous. From then on out he behaved as if he were the child's other parent and it annoyed me to no end-Quil did not move into Claire's house...eek..I really ran off with that one, didn't I? I do apologize. Long ramble made short? I hope Jacob feels some agony for being so selfish. Of course, if you like Jacob that is cool too, I have read many stories where the author makes him into a very likable character-either way, I am very much looking forward to future chapters...

Will we see it in other POVs? Not necessarily Bella but more: Jake, Edward, Alice, *miscellaneous Cullen*...