You should make one where Thaddeus tries to steal Isabella from Phineas as revenge

WOW!

I forget what their voices sound like,

But I imagine it close to the evil henchmen from "Flushed Away"

Spike and whitey

Yay! Happy ending!

A plot twist!

OMG. Thor was invited. :D
I hope this all works out.

Aw, poor Thor. (Hey, I'm a poet, and I didn't realize it until just now!)

Oh, I can think of a certain someone who might not notice...
Update soon!

Whoops. Looking back to the comments I don't see how they're flaming you, it's more like they're giving you advice. But, I don't see how this is like a script...at all. It looks traditional to me.

And there's nothing wrong with the writing style. I like it. And other people do. :3

So, yeah, guys, I wouldn't be angry at people who are trying to give out advice. They're only trying to help the best they can. :)

I have no idea why people are flaming you, but this is a pretty good story. It isn't perfect, but, I like it anyway. :3

This is really good and really funny, keep it up. It's only my first time too so I know how hard it is.

Redtudel is a moron.

stupid fuckers, why you bash the story with your inane reviews: The story was amazing, and pefect in the way in which it was written. It is certainkly much better than anything that the stupid Redtutel and Lynx Akita could ever write.

What the hell is wrong with you? You fall for shit like Cupcakes, but you arent unable to properly recognize a masterpiece like this. Fuck this stupid fanfiction world.

I don't want this to sound like spam or flames but, ever heard of quotation marks? Forgive the spelling.

I don't like this type of writing. The plot is pretty darn amazing, but, can you make it like story writing, and not script. Because it's hard for me to imagine what's happening.

BUT I LOVE THE PLOTLINE! DDD

what the nice fic.