In a way the doomslayer is the devil punishing evil and the tomb is his cage

Excellent story.

"You hungry, you ugly fucker, then eat this!" said Zuka as he forced the heart down its throat.

Ummm...since when were elites known for cursing like sailors?

Oh hey another generic doom story, I wonder how-

under they're wrath

they're

THEY'RE

You stupid illiterate fuck

Pretty good story. I look forward to reading more.

all in all a good story but next update be sure you focus back on Jack and the doctor again as well as the other party your just focusing on the Elite and the Spartan too much me thinks even if they are minor characters they still need to be part of the story somewhat.

Dude, this shit is fucking awsome. its great.

Hmm... Aliens? ...I don't know, its really up to you. I think that sense the Covenant war is about to end (u mentioned the prophet of regreat fiknding Instillation 05 Halo) that mabey after the war is over they could form like some special tasks group? For dealing with shit like this, IE Aleins...

Its really up to you as the author though.

Fucking oorah. Reading this makes duty go by fast.

HahaS even the forces of hell can't stop a Spartan. Fuck yeah.

Motovate me man, keep it comeing.

Oh hell yes! I fucking love it! Its brilliant and nicely written.

U do a fine job of putting me right there in the story, and I can find no flaws so far in your

Writeing except the covenant seem a little OOC. An elite commander wldnt let those hunters push him around like that, unless I missed somthing and they're somehow a higher rank than an elite commander. The comic relief is great and helps make the story more real. I love it. The grunts seem a little less...

"Grunty"...u know what I mean damnit lol.

Very great story, can't wait to read more! Keep it comeing!

Ps. Wow... I hvnt heard of a Spectere in ages. Can't even remember the last time I fought with one of those. What ever happened to them?