Reviews for Mello Might be Overprotective |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I know Im late but ive been looking for sooooo many fics where mello is in the mafia and is overprotecrive of matt so gets the mafia to protect him. Yours was the only one I found. I was just wondering if you knew any more like this thanks for your help and sorry it was so long and late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TT Mello is so wonderful! Matt is so sweet and wonderful too! Goddamnit why'd they go and die in the books! They deserve to live together forever! WAH I miss them! |
![]() ![]() the actual story line scenario was pretty good, a lot of people don't know the first thing about "plot." but, you were missing something VERY important. where was the FLUFF!? I love a lovey-dovey Mello! it evens out all his asshole-ness. and Matt should just fawn over this Mello that loves him so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aawwwwe. I found that so heartwarming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was...I loved it! It was so cute (and slightly disturbing) that Mello would do that for Matt! Great story! I love your stories! They're really amazing! :D |
![]() ![]() Kay, I am officially a fan of Your writing D if I had a FF account, you and xxbeyondxbirthdayxx would be ivn my faves list. I wuv youz! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man. My favorite part of this isn't even the M/M goodness. It's the descriptions of how Mello runs the Mafia. Crazy Fuck as a nickname, detailed, detailed threats, and my favorite-straight guys acting gay for promotions-that one was HILARIOUS. Although this was kind of dark, I quite enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its soooo sweet and teary and adorable and scary and I can't stop thinking about this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this it's so cute how protective mello is of matt and so funny how his mafia ppl were pretending to be gay to suck up to mello xDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep. This was amazing, and beautifully executed. Lesson of the day: DO NOT mess with what is Mello's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was seriously awesome, too bad it was only a one shot. I love the way you've written the characters, and the simple dialogues. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I love this story! I love the way you've written the characters :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable,i can totally see Mello being over protective you're really a great writer :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah the guys who shot matt are lucky mello was busy with his plan and died before he had the chance to kill them. loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...i sorta want a boyfriend like Mello now |