Reviews for Sibling Love |
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![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwwww! too cute for words! |
![]() ![]() could you do one between fred and george? i think thatd b funny...loved the first chapter, thats my favorite one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe, poor Lily! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i freakin love your Hugo(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() that just furthered my belief that Ron was my favorite character! i wanted to cry when Ron hugged Ginny, it was absolutely adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved all of these sibling pairings. You should write more. I really liked Rose and Hugos that is just the way I pictured them together. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() I would LOVE to read more! Could u do the black sisters, sirius n regulus, the weasleys n all the new kids? :) x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! You should write a Fred & George one Or a James & Albus Really well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, another good chapter. And once again it seemed to deal with several different relationships, rather than just between two of the characters. I really loved how you tackled parents' expectations in this one. I think it was wonderful how Hermione got caught up in the vision of how she thought her daughter should be, and ended up causing harm. The younger sibling cheering up the older sibling this time - that really worked. I thought Hugo was very sweet. My favourite line would probably be: "There was no point in replying with words. She felt quite certain that if she did open her mouth, she would start crying and apologizing all at once." Rose was really torn up by this, and it showed. I've really enjoyed the two chapters you have up so far, and I hope you plan on continuing. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good first chapter! I love the theme of family members, and I think you did so well to capture just what kind of relationship Ron and Ginny have. Ron is very protective of her and you really showed that. Criticisms: Where are they? Maybe I missed something, but I couldn't work that out. Also, I think this could do with being betaed. The mistakes are small, but they're noticeable things such as 'it's' instead of 'its' in the first sentence of the second paragraph, and incorrect usage of the word 'enrage' - it should be 'rage'. Sometimes your punctuation is off the mark, too... and, no, I didn't mean to make such a bad pun. xD Another thing I liked was how not only did you cover some of Ron and Ginny's relationship, but also some of Ron and Harry's. I loved how it tied into canon, and the scene with Ron comforting Ginny was really touching. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good; I liked the character development it showed. And non-Head Girl Rose is just great. :) More soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awrr, I love this. The idea is so sweet to do a bunch of sibling one shots! Love it! Can't wait to read more. Rach!e xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, I really loved that. Sweet moments between Ron and Ginny are the awesomesauce. Great job! |