Its a shame that you quit writing half way through. It was really good writing however the fact that its unfinished makes it a waste of time and a total let down.

So I have been working very hard over the past few days to catch up to your story. I am speechless at your insane writing ability. I have never before read a story where the author takes such a great care in providing a viable and true story as close to fact as possible. It is a rare treat. I do have a few questions. Will book 2 be a completely separate story from book one? Can you give the poor humans and na'vi clan a break? They need it and I would very much like to read some lighter fluffier clan stuff, specifically between jake and neytiri. Once again, you story amazes me more each time I read it, update soon!

RiverOfSecrets.

So I have been working very hard over the past few days to catch up to your story. I am speechless at your insane writing ability. I have never before read a story where the author takes such a great care in providing a viable and true story as close to fact as possible. It is a rare treat. I do have a few questions. Will book 2 be a completely separate story from book one? Can you give the poor humans and na'vi clan a break? They need it and I would very much like to read some lighter fluffier clan stuff, specifically between jake and neytiri. Once again, you story amazes me more each time I read it, update soon!

RiverOfSecrets.

The "Well of Souls"? Is this "Avatar", or "Raiders of the Lost Ark"? ;)

Otherwise, well written! Good job!

this was a really good ending

This story is amazing! I'm only like 11 chapters in but I love how there is plenty of romance and yet there still is a plot. I usually get bored during really long stories especially on this website but this is amazing. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this so great job and I can't wait to finish reading the chapters that are already up!

There were children seen in the film quite often.

L'Shana Tova

i like this story alot cant wait to read more keep it coming

y'know, you can put in line breakers using the chapter checking on ff . net before actually posting.

It's cute how Ralu thinks of Norm as her boyfriend! Little kids and their imaginations!

Such a sad chapter! *sob* Why did Karen have to die!

I love Ralu so much! She's so adorable and her special psychic abilities are amazing!

Wow, more twists and turns to the story. However, while I saw that people have commented on making the story more "Jake/Neytiri" oriented, I'm glad that it's not. It can sometimes be hard to have just the right level of "romance" without a story becoming too sappy. Overly romantic can render a story unpalatable, so I'm glad that it's not so couple-centric. I like that you have Jake/Neytiri time in small morsels throughout the story-not so little that you don't get a sense of their developing relationship, but not too much that you get sick of them.

I must also concur in the request to flesh out the Na'vi background and culture, which I see is beginning to unfold. The beauty of fanfiction is that an author gets to run with a fandom and bring it to new heights and open it up to new insights of the created world that the original book/movie/etc did not take time, or did not have time, to deeply explore.

With that, as you continue to enrich the Na'vi culture, I think somewhere you should list Na'vi terms, should more come into use. I'll see how that goes.

Again, thanks for the story-I know that reviews are a fanfic author's motivation to keep going.

Wow, this thing gets more exciting as it goes along! One thing I thought about (yes, delayed thought reaction): are any of the Na'vi outside of the movie characters described in the texts/scripts you reference? Or are they characters you've created and named? I don't know who most of them are, but I am only acquainted with Avatar the Movie and nothing more.

Bah, I'm stuck reading on my laptop in the dark to keep from waking my mother :P I will blame my bad eyesight on you, as I am hooked now. ;)

Whoa, serious hostilities here :P I don't know what ftue'kxetse means, but it's gotta be serious badness. Are these terms in the Activist Survival Guide, and is it free access? I guess I'll find out.

If possible, I think it might be nice to have a quick glossary of Na'vi terms for those like me that don't have any knowledge of Avatar outside of strictly movie material.

Still a very interesting read, thanks again! On with the story...