I don't know why, but for some reason, I really like your story!
It appeals to me.

And, as weird as it sounds, picturing what you described them doing, (the rat sex), was actually kinda hot.. Heh.

I really wish that there was more.

Maybe you'll consider a sequel?.. That would be awesome! :)
Like, they finally do move to the valley, and Jenner and Justin announce publicly that they're lovers?.. After telling Nicodemus first, of course. :)

And more detailed rat sex?.. Pretty please?.. :)

I love this and I want more!

Lovely! Although this makes the fight between Justin and Jenner in the movie all the more tragic. Also, I'm wondering if Nicodemus was watching in his magic stone and if Mr. Ages was thinking of this when he told Justin Jenner was dangerous...anyway, I'm rambling, getting all my thoughts out. The point is, this is amazing a definitly worthy of a sequel or similar fics!

Okay, so I know that this was written forever ago, but this is seriously great! I'd love a sequel or even just more Jenner/Justin.

Hi there, Zuvios Gemini. randomkungfupandafan told me about you. He also told me to make an inspiration from your story on my NIMH fanfic. You should check it out. It's a christmas fanfic and you'll really like it.

...I just rewatched the Secret of NIMH and I am now in love with Jenner and Justin. Please for the love of God do not abandon this story! You must continue it! Its good!

YOU, MY DEAR AUTHOR, ARE AWESOME!

Oh my God, I knew it! When I was little I asked my mom if the reason Justing and Jenner didn't get along was becouse they were sexually frustrated with each other. And now I know it's becouse Justin is always uke. . Loved it!

wow that was awesome! can't wait for the next chapter! ;D

Okay so, I just saw(watched for the 100th time) the movie tonight, and my yaoi fangirl senses kicked in. Cause I luv Justin so much! So I see that the fandom has only two stories and im dissapointed. Until I clicked on it. I'm so happy that u have exactly what I'm looking for cause I did not want to be the only one liking this pairing. You r amazing just for putting it up!

Hurry up and update! i love this story! :D

It was an okay chapter, but I'm wondering if Joralyn ever met Amy Rose from Sonic the Hedgehog. Because she somewhat acts like, as well as having a hammer kind of like Amy does?

It kind of sounds like maybe Jenner is going have his way with Justin a little? And if that's the case the next chapter sould be M rated because of male rat slash.

This looks very good so far! :-) The imagery during the dream sequence was wonderfully dramatic and vivid, as it should be. Thank you for being the one to add this movie to the list! It's long been a favorite of mine, and you did it justice.

Oh, I'm liking THIS story! _ Can't wait to see more of it! :D