Reviews for Harry Potter and the Path to Greatness
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29
Why would remus not teach him of magic befor his 11th birthday? MASSIVE plot hole.
Bigguy45 chapter 19 . 6/13
Why did you stop the story is interesting so far and would look forward to more chaps
Guest chapter 12 . 4/2
You know you were better off skipping his first few years cause no matter how intelligent harry is or how learned he is he’s still 12 at most. So in all honesty the fact that he’s eleven but is coming up with a bunch of ideas and is acting like he’s a experienced adult comes off as flimsy and annoying. Like I said it would have been better skipping into his 3rd or 4th year. Doesn’t help that you’ve basically abandoned the story and decided to be so slow with the plot.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/2
You know I don’t have an actual issue with a intelligent harry but this analytical and making him this powerful when he’s barely been in his first year of hogwarts is crazy.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/2
I knew making him ambidextrous you going to make him dual wield wands like it’s in any way realistic
Guest chapter 6 . 4/2
I hate the ambidextrous bull shit, writers always do dumb things with it. Also there are serious issues with being ambidextrous and why it’s so rare, even if you are ambidextrous you still have a preferred hand for everything and unless your constantly switching your hands you will quickly stop being ambidextrous. I was ambidextrous till I was about 7 then my right hand ended up becoming my dominant hand.
MpJames chapter 14 . 1/28
a thoroughly contrived and boring story.
uzieh chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
u havent updated yet
Guest chapter 19 . 12/20/2019
Great story. Absolutely love it so far. Please continue.
Anonymous chapter 19 . 11/11/2019
Could you continue?
Tenjo chapter 9 . 10/25/2019
Ah this is THAT story. The one where he casually performs charms that fifth years learn, mentions having read through all the standard book of spells’ and yet still can’t perform the levitation charm. Makes perfect sense. If you want to make him seem less overpowered and perfect, maybe make it believable? You’ve basically made a mathematician who can’t do simple addition.
SKFF chapter 19 . 8/22/2019
Definitely one of the best stories I’ve read on this site. It’s well written and the story seems well formed.
Hope you come back to this someday and continue it.
Amazing work.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 19 . 5/13/2019
A great story here so far!
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
Wow this story is good, too bad it stopped updating
Katt31257 chapter 4 . 2/11/2019
Another thing. Parceltongue is a language of SNAKES, how in the hell could there be a written version of it? Don't get me wrong, I've already stopped reading this crap. I wasn't completely out till I saw him picking up advanced magic books
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