Reviews for A Concert in the Park |
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charmiaj chapter 1 . 12/28/2017 Read this more than ten times and I can still feel the love. Thanks for this. |
Ria chapter 1 . 1/9/2017 Wow wow wow wow wow |
Luna12 chapter 1 . 8/17/2014 Wow. I think you built the sexual tension well and realistically. It was a little surprising they did that in semi-public. There are a few lines you have that are pure gold. Overall, the style comes across perfectly as the voice of a high school girl, which is exactly what Akane is right now. I could very well believe this to be the natural progression of their relationship. I hope you have a chance to check out my Ranma/Akane story "Of Loss, Life, and Love" |
Bobbwa chapter 1 . 7/4/2014 Awww |
Carrie chapter 1 . 4/11/2014 Best...Bedtime story...EVER! This has officially become one of my favorites! Thank you! |
PolkaDotLily chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 Love it so funny and romantic. |
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 5/29/2012 Loved this. Very realistic first time coupling (well, petting) and it's semi-accidental, very much in public, tentative but with a promise of more now that they've confessed to each other. That was a great concert! |
afgsh chapter 1 . 4/18/2012 What I like about how this is written how detailed and romantic it is but it doesn't hit the 'porn' like side. Also that you kept their personality, Ranma's feelings and shyness about being close to her, and a new side to them :) |
Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 1/26/2012 THAT WAS SO GOOD AND HOT! I LOVE RANMA :) |
75daysofyou chapter 1 . 11/12/2011 oh. this was very, very lovely. :) |
Sweety chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 I love it! I love Ranma & Akane's stories! I HOPE you write Loose Gi's and Lost Focuses again and other stories! You are a very very very Good author!Don't give up please! |
Ranma and akane forever chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 wow... i enjoyed the romance, thanks for writing this. :) |
r chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 awesome story |
RamonaFlowers25 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011 *sniffle* that was...so...SWEET! I loved it dude. -Ramona F. |
makoto chapter 1 . 1/7/2011 It's great to have you back. It's always disapointing to find a really good ranma and akane fic thats not finished and seems to have been abbandoned so I'm excited to read updates to your old stuff and any new work you come out with. |