Loved it

Haha! I thought it was hilarious when Danny was so bummed that he thought he'd ruined the sweater. That seems like a Danny thing to do. This is an awesome story!

What a lovely way to end! I loved it!

You are a fantastic writer, and I really enjoy this story. :)

vry nice end to a wonderful sexy story...keep up the good work...i can't wait for what ideas you would have for your next story...keep up the good work!

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I'm happy that you are back and in good spirits, but I have one question...there was character named Lindsay in here? :D Wow, was that sensual and HAWT! My god between you and Brinchen86, I think my days of reading smut has just gotten busier. Thank god she doesn't have to shoulder the burden alone anymore.

And the ending was so unexpected but flaming hot! No wonder so many people love Danny, his mind should be cautioned for dangerous and out of control fires that he sparks in Lindsay. Not to mention us, his audience. The only objection I have is this "The End." You leaving us already? More please! What is next Batigrl? ;)

Favorite lines

"She knew that this was one of his favourite places on her body. He had told her once that he loved this particular area so much because of the fact that it was the half-way point between his two favourite parts of her - her mind and her heart."

"I do, Linds," he reassured her. "It's so fucking hot when you do that for me. But right now only I get to touch you."

I love it when he gets possessive like that.

"To her there was nothing hotter than predatory, possessive, commanding Danny."

"You know I'll never 'oogle' any girl other than you, right?"

She giggled into his chest, then looked up at him, a smile on her face.

"Is that a promise?"

"I'm pretty sure it was in my wedding vows, actually," he said. "But in case you missed it, I hereby give you a 'no-oogling' guarantee."

She laughed again and nuzzled into his chest once more. They lay in each others arms, legs tangled togtether under the warm blanket, sleep quickly creeping up on them.

"I love you, Danny," she murmured sleepily.

"Love you too, Linds," he said before pressing a kiss to her temple and allowing himself to drift off as well."

"She smacked his arm playfully as a smile broke out on his face. He carefully opened his eyes, blinking until they adjusted to the sunlight filling the room. "What were you thinking about?" he asked knowingly.

She stroked his cheek with the backs of her fingers, then gently touched her index finger to the tip of his nose. "I was thinking about you," she said, "and how amazing you were last night."

"Well," he said beaming at her, "I try."

Man, this was so incredibly sexy! Seriously, this was really hot. I love how they satisfied each other so expertly, knowing excatly what to do. I love how they tried something new and how amazing it was for them. I love how she thought about how he looks like when he sleeps, that was so adorable and lovely. They share such a close relationship and you portrayed that so well again. I really love how you add the closeness and love between them and then mix it with the hotness of the smut. Amazing! And of course Danny has only eyes for her; Lindsay is the most beautiful woman ever.

This story was amazing and I love how you ended it. It was really wonderful how you built up the tension over the chapters, how they teased each other and then got their satisfaction, yet you showed us also how much they love each other.

You did great work with this story and like I told you, I really hope you will do more M rated stories.

Very hot.

I love this chapter. I really like the flashbacks and memories.

But really, how can you leave us hanging like this? I was so excited to see what you have planned for them in the bedroom :)

Can't wait for more!

i luv it..

plz keep on going...

though i luv the cheerleader part...i found the their intimacy during the wheelchair period the most interesting among all..cuz not much had been written for it...n from yr version...it s so romantic and sensual ...I luv how u described n wrote it...

Keep going...always support u XD

So not fun to tease but that is ok.

Have fun in the land of no internet. You could still bring a laptop to write...

Wonderful chapter. :)

Favorite line: "She was everything he'd never known he'd always wanted, rolled up in a beautiful package."

As I have told Brinchen86 when we talk about this story, this is not smut anymore. Not with the emotion and love that you clearly show and write so beautifully in here. This is romance pure and simple. You have this couple with all of their faults, loving each other the way a wife who knows her husband and a husband who LOVES seeing his wife fall apart in his arms. :) I love how you phrased it "he had gotten tremendous emotional satisfaction from bringing Lindsay to orgasm using his fingers and his tongue, even though there was no physical satisfaction for him at the time."

That is what I hated about his being in the wheelchair, that he thought that he was useless, and it was the furthest thing from the truth. To me the wheelchair only gave him a different POV on things. And showed him how lucky he was to have someone like Lindsay at his side. Because when he told her he wanted her, I felt it. Their love for each other made me cry, you are so good at this. I ADORE all of the backstories you have written for us, they are what keeps me coming back and back...okay, the whole story is what keeps me coming back, you are EXCELLENT at this. Never doubt your writing again! I love that predatory gleam in his eyes. *shivers*

But the fun they have in bed is also much fun to read. :D I can't believe that he panicked over stretching her sweater, I bet if he had, her mom would have been sent to get her another one. It is a good thing he didn't know her at sixteen, her daddy would have really been after him with a shotgun. ;) I can't wait for him to worship her body. Yes, you are horrible...but hurry back okay? Or can we chip in to get your friends a dial-up connection?

Favorite lines

"She was a vision of loveliness. She was everything he'd never known he'd always wanted, rolled up in a beautiful package.

He couldn't believe what she had done for him tonight. He had been so beaten down with tiredness and stress when he had left the office and begun his journey home. But finding that his wife had taken the time to plan out this amazing night for him, simply because she wanted to cheer him up, made his heart melt."

"For such a shy, quiet, unassuming country girl, she really had a mouth on her at times, and he was forever grateful that this was a side of herself that she felt comfortable enough to share with him."

"Lindsay had been his shining beacon of hope during those difficult months. She had stood by him, encouraged him, and made him feel special when he had felt anything but."

"And he had made gentle, sweet love to his wife that night. Finally able to join himself with her again, he had felt whole for the first time in months. He had been terrified that it wouldn't feel the same, that he wouldn't feel the same to her. But it had been a night where their love had been expressed through tender caresses and gentle touches, a night that had made them both aware of the depth of the connection that they shared. And what they could have lost.

It was that revelation, more than the sex itself, that had been seared into Danny's memory. It was the night that he had realized that he had found his soul mate."

"You know Lindsay, we've talked about this," said Danny teasingly. "When you want something, you really need to remember to use your words."

"You done teasing me, Montana?" he asked.

Her playful smile widened into a mischievous grin.

"Never," she replied. "Getting you all riled up is way too much fun."

"She had never seen Danny move so fast. His head popped out from under the shirt in a flash and she could not help the laughter that escaped her as she looked at how his hair stood up in crazy little spikes all over his head.

"Huh?"

"Danny, I don't wear clothes that don't fit me," she explained logically.

"What?" he asked, crestfallen. "It's not ruined is it?"

Aww, you will be so missed, but hey, at least something to look forward to when you're back. ;) I hope you'll have a great time.

This was once again perfect. I need to find other words for perfect because I really don't want to bore you with always saying the same stuff over and over again.

But it was! Please, can you write all those other moments as smut oneshots as well? The pool table, the time he helped her along and the first time they had sex again? I know you would do it so amazingly well.

The beginning of this once again made me smile like a dork because it was filled with so much pure love and shows us how much Danny and Lindsay mean to each other. They're loving each other so much and you showed that amazingly well. I'm always fascinated by the way you describe emotions. Brilliant!

Then there was this erotic teasing and all. Yummy! You do the perfect balance; show them so much in love but also as the incredibly sexy couple they are.

Oh, a cliffhanger! But this is the best kind of a cliffhanger. It makes me eagerly looking forward to more. Brilliant work, like always!

The interlude wasn't boring at all! It was really good. My favorite part so far.

And yes, of course you should continue! What kind of question is that? Hahaha. :)

I really enjoyed the flashback to Danny & Lindsay's life while he was in the wheelchair. It gave the story substance.

Yes, you must continue in the bedroom!