Reviews for Stealing Prey |
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monay9e chapter 1 . 3/16/2018 Oh my goodness! I see Z being a good mate for the Youngblood once he finds out that she is a female, especially if they can stop hating each other. Please finish this story. |
jrmf chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 Totally amazing story! I'm sad to see no updates or more chapters. I'm interested to read more of the story. It could go many ways. Plz continue. |
cccc chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 why is their only one chapter i loved this especially the small girl and tall one great story |
Inu-Boi-Bigs chapter 1 . 3/28/2012 Awesome I want more |
NothereNorthere chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 OMG! A SEQUEL NEEDS TO HAPPEN! NO QUESTIONS ASKED! |
badboywest chapter 1 . 10/28/2010 hope to see more of this story and its follow ups. as it was a good read |
Kayzin chapter 1 . 9/13/2010 Is there gonna be a sequel? I love this story! |
QuickStar chapter 1 . 8/24/2010 this one-shot should be turn into a story XD yes it should |
burnt chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 Great story! This needs a chapter two don't you think? I loved the smaller ooman! I don't think you named her though, which was cool too. Anyway, nice one! You got skills. |
callmeBaby'08 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 this was awesome seriously you have got to come up with like a sequel to this story or like add another chapter to this one. Too cool thats all i can say to describe it Zulie was hard-core, and Rah' Dum' Twei was something else, but the other two characters were MY favorites. |
OceanFire9 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010 Dude, this was ROYALLY epic! YA-HA-HAR! WHOO! _ And WHERE the hell do you get your Yautja vocab from? That was awesome! |
Dragonfiz chapter 1 . 3/20/2010 I LOVE THIS! I enjoyed writing this piece and hope that you have liked and will like reading it. I wanted to do something a little different with the theme and experiment with some things I've been rolling around in my head. I think that it worked. I really love the characters and had a lot of fun with Zulie and Rah' Dum" Twei. I suspect you will see them again... this is like their Début... I hope they made a great first impression... The entire story takes place in less than two hours. (A little something to know if you didn't know already.) I'm very interested in hearing from you so please make comments, suggestions or just send "shout outs" to the characters. Well ... THANKS for reading STEALING PREY And also read "Unforgettable" and "Dragh'Ar Ghon the Arbiter" these are two more fanfics by myself. I'll be looking for your REVIEWS... |