I love this story. It is really good. I was sorta wondering what Brittany is going to be in this story or is she not going to be in this story. will Alvin do the same sorta flirting he did with Jenatte. Sorry if I spelled her name wrong. Anyway tell me about it. I really want Brittany in this story!

Pretty cool and I see the rush point too lol. It was like a drop off point oh well can't wait

LOL i got a kick out of when
alvin whistled3
LOL this story is so funny:)
date soon! (LOVE THIS)

Cool. Can't wait for more.

Yes it is kinda rushed at the ed but it turned out great!

1. Why Simon gotta be the bad guy

and

2. They aren't going to kill him when they find him...are they? They better not! I have a idea and to will add a twist to the story. Pm me to find out.

Hooves? Is someone coming to get them? I can't wait for the next chapter.

I don't know why but it seems like a lot of spelling mistakes are getting by you Mr. Shaw, great chapter otherwise.

Bahahaha

'You followin' me?'

Lmfao that cracked me up.

I can't wait to see what's goin on.

Update soon!

I love this story :}

Whoa, didn't see that one coming. What Eleanor said, that was french wasn't it? I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Oh bad girl ellie

lol

please up date!

i liked how she was a little out of character

and how she was wid simon

lol

this story is so funny

date soon!

o elle is a bad girl in this chapter. way out of character, but i like it!

ColonelShaw, could you please make a fanfiction of the sploosh episode jsut so everyone will know the storyline please.

Great chapter. I can't for the next one.

Yeah I'm with Theodore Blanche(LoL idk y i put that name).What is Alvin Kiff(idk y i put that name either)up to?