This was really moving and a very interesting alternative storyline to come up with! I've never even considered the possibility of it, but Harry's life certainly would be extremely different had he been raised by Sirius.

Your descriptions are so vivid, you have a real flair for them! They really make the story more impacting and effective.

I do hope you continue on with this, I'll definately read it! :D

*cough cough* *gets scary voice on* YOU WILL WRITE CHAPTER 2! OR I WILL GO BOOM! ...ok bye :) luv the story

Hi good first chapter so really hope you continue. Have put this on alert aswell. One thing though- James had hazel eyes not green.

Very good start. I'm really looking forward to Sirius taking Harry to Grimmauld Place. Is Sirius going to stay there with Harry? Sirius could put the fidelius on the house and be his own secret keeper.

Hi, just read your first chapter, and I hope you continue. Very good use of descriptive narrative. Can't wait for more! Great job, well done!

linden

Wow Nomie!

Fantastic as usual:P I find myself intrigued! Please write more soon! (its not crap no matter how much you say it is)

Hannah!