Reviews for Harry Potter and the Final Temptation
lazy-kaa chapter 16 . 9/2/2019
Do you think that this justice is somewhat relevant? Is it fine to kill for poor treatment? Did someone die? Sorry, it becomes difficult to read with less logic ahead. With such system Harry might really become dark lord.
lazy-kaa chapter 15 . 9/1/2019
I think that this chapter was worst of written. Loyalty on wands? What is it? Harry among dark people? Dumbledore is equal to dark lord? He is too old to play such games. However, he is general on the bring of the war. Rimas might be good and clever, but all such stories with dark Dumbledore have one thing: everyone is more clever than strongest magic person... He might be strange, but not the one with tendency to be in range of dark lords.
Sylvezar chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
I really wanna read it but 1 million words is a lot and its on hiatus and I still need to actually do stuff and that won't happen with 1 million words... I WILL BE BACK!
red.dwarf.girl chapter 130 . 11/5/2017
Excellent chapter!
JorjaLupin chapter 130 . 11/3/2017
I was beginning to believe you'd given up on this- great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
iadorespike chapter 130 . 11/2/2017
Cool, thanks for the update!

*hugs*
krasni chapter 130 . 11/2/2017
Great chapter

Harry does not remember anything of his time with Nyx, or it's all a plan to save Mione, somehow.

I found it curious that Caroline arrived just with Remus of all people, it seems to me that the boy is trying to send information with her as a means of communication, without others knowing.

Great chapter
a greeting
jkarr chapter 130 . 11/2/2017
to bad about hermione
decadenceofmysoul chapter 129 . 10/24/2017
Awesome story so far!
fhl1234 chapter 129 . 6/13/2017
This chapter has certainly been very conversational :) Nyx and Harry's debate about what to do next was very complex. I guess the real question is, what decision is the right one for Harry to do? Where exactly in time should he go back to to best make things right? Is this going to be one of the last chapters? Either way, thanks for writing all three very long fics.
tsr6 chapter 129 . 6/10/2017
Interesting twist - I'm hopeful for the loose ends to be tied up.
krasni chapter 129 . 6/6/2017
Great chapter.

So i presume will be end soon.

I mean, this looks like a final chapter.

But an epilogue will be nice.

Bye
jkarr chapter 129 . 6/6/2017
this is an interesting update.
JorjaLupin chapter 129 . 6/6/2017
Please do not tell me this is how it ends! I want to know if Harry saves the world and gets the girl!
red.dwarf.girl chapter 129 . 6/6/2017
Excellent chapter!
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