Dropped his drawers? This is stupid.

"My penis prisms were dancing with Alice's tit glitters. I could have died right then and there a happy, contented man."
-Just spewed soda all over the computer. All. Over. BWAHAHAHAHA! ;D Luv ya, Jazzy and Al!

please write another chapter that was good. Not even good it was GREAT!

Wow, that was amazing! It described the scenes in so much detail it really sucked you in. It was so capturing I read it twice and enjoyed it over and over. The way you decided to describe Alice and Jasper was just pure genious. As you said , no one is as great as "Queen Stephenie Meyer ." I believe you definetely outdid any of the other short stories I've read. Please keep writing so everyone else can enjoy.

Loved it :D

I couldn't stop laughing at "Penis Prisms" LOL..! Jaspers is amazing :D and I started scraming when Jazz asked alice to marry him :P Oh...! and your idea of Alice's scanty knowledge on how to put on lingerine was hilarious...! :D

Will there be anything added to this?

That is a sweet story. I lovede the idea that at one time our little Pixie did not know about the faux pau of improper dress codes. Hahaha. The love scene is fantastic and the love they shared moved me. Good job!

This was really great! I loved this POV. Nice job.

yo it was differentbut full of emotion even a bit of humer! i loved it :)

great and interesting, love them, love it :-D

its diffrent to read something from Jasper POV

this was really good.