This, this ia absolutely beautiful.

she's such a messed up mom she gave up her right to hate spock or pike or anyone for being any sort of well-meaning threat to her kid.

I have freakin TEARS IN MY EYES from reading this.

You are the most amazing authour I have come across on this site. I am so glad I found you.

This is absolutely lovely :3

I've always thought that Kirk was more like Winona than George! You capture her absolutely wonderfully here. I like all the little quirks that just make her seem so real.

(Like her reaction to Spock!)

So awesome :D Thank you.

I liked the ending. There was resolution and that is good. It is always so sad when things just end, but this didn't so yay.

This is just Loverly. I loved it to pieces. I loved the tiredness and subtle intensity in her opinion-and it's so much more belieable than when winona is this total badass. it's nice to understand (for once) *why* she's so angry. I might just use this in my fic, if you don't mind. I really loved it. can't review more, gtg.

Love loads,

Lady Merlin

wow, this was brilliant! Very deep, but not so deep that you drown in the words, it flowed really well.

love it! and thanks for the quick update

Very sad and yet, I loved it.

you know what? I LOVE THIS! Amazing job please update soon. And oh yeah your Winona? kick ass ; )

Fantastic!

I love your Winona! Can't wait to read more!