they're so cute. Little raptor fit.

I love how this reads. Raptor reds baby is going to be a great character. The poisonous lizard is a super cool littke critter. is it based on anything, or just a plausible little critter that could have existed?

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this book is shit i dont like it. how do u stop at just the second chapter. i cantttttttt with you man!1

this book is shit

I love the original book, and look forward to reading the rest of your story!

You think you could add in the great dane-sized tyrannosaurs that lived with the new giant neovenatorid theropod Siats?

I have always liked this book from the point of view that it came from. Keep that up.

Oooh, what happened to make the pair so aggitated? I gotta know what happens next!

Oh my goodness, this is so good! It's so detailed and really fits how the original book was written. Poor little male chick...

You should change the category to Raptor Red section in Books. It's there now.