Reviews for A Week in Wonderland
multyfangirl21 chapter 9 . 5/21/2019
well at least you have real trust between you and Alice, thats one thing that you have over James Hatter.
multyfangirl21 chapter 6 . 5/8/2019
so he drugged her with a love potion?!
multyfangirl21 chapter 5 . 5/8/2019
yeah i can see Chess being the one to point that out
Patricia chapter 10 . 7/2/2016
Ahhhh am at chapter 10 and am freaking out love it though !
Tessitra chapter 15 . 3/14/2016
SoI was Reading this fic in one day in less Than one your XD IT was really good! However now I noticed the latest uppdate :/ and I know how it feels When People stress you out with updating reviews, especially when you don't have inspiration. I do fully Hope you get another charter in the future(: because I really adored the chapters that were available! I Will be following your story (:
TheBrokenSunrise chapter 15 . 1/24/2015
Please, please update this story! It's the best AIW fanfic I've ever read!
Emi Trix and Luna chapter 15 . 10/26/2014
UPDATE!
SheWhoMustNotBeWritten chapter 15 . 8/4/2014
This is so great! I love how it's twisting and turning and I hope you update soon!
Maelia Airwood chapter 15 . 3/18/2014
Nononono don't let Hatter die!
xXEchoedScreamsXx chapter 15 . 12/31/2013
Amazing story! I absolutely love it! I do hope you finish this eventually, I'd love to read the ending!
OkHai3 chapter 15 . 10/24/2013
I obviously am late here but IT SEEMS TO HAVE BEEN A YEAR AND YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS PLEASE!
UnicornMister chapter 3 . 10/5/2013
Hello there, love your story. It's very interesting, but there were a few parts that I was uncertain with. In the Tim Burton version of the movie, Alice goes without a corset because she finds it absurd, which would be most comparable to going around without a bra on nowadays, I think. That said, the fact that you don't mention her to be wearing any underclothing can be strange or exciting, however you want to play it. I did some googling just to assuage my wonderings and found that heavy padding was worn underneath the armor, and that generally the suits were around 50 pounds.
Of course she wouldn't wear all that heavy padding under her night gown, so when she hugs the hatter you might want to draw attention to her lack of slip and underclothing, something about her feeling the heat of his body through the thin material etc.
She could be a strong girl, but she is awfully thin. You might want to add in some thought dialogue about her wondering if she should ask the hatter for his help in removing her armor. Again, it's heavy stuff.
Other than that this is great and I can't wait to finish it! Hope my ramblings were helpful :)
Me-and-no-name chapter 15 . 8/2/2013
This is so great!

I really hope ypu finish this some day.

I love it!

Congratulation!
wolfYLady-sama chapter 15 . 5/21/2013
Is that the end?
Bittersw33tCarousel chapter 15 . 5/6/2013
Wow what a story! I just finished reading it... Wonderful! I really hope you'll finish it.
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