Loved it.

Wow... this is probably the most... FANTASTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ! :D

Seriously though, this was amazing! I am a fan of the Labyrinth series for watching the movie (believe it or not the first time I saw it was on the Disney channel O_o..) and reading the manga.

Can you believe they are making a prequel to it?! I can't wait!

Anyways, you are an amazing writer! You have HUGE creativity!

Continue writing, I hope to see more of your stories!

From your patient reader,

Pheonix.

I don't normaly read Jareth/OC stories but gave this one a shot after reading the sequel for this one, about how not all unwanted babies are wished away. I liked this story, it was sweet, thank you for writting it.

Beautiful song, thank you for including it in your story. I have been able to find many new favorite songs through stories on this site.

love you story.

Just spent the last two days reading this on my phone because I could not put it down. (And now I have Dreams to Dream stuck in my head. LOL!) I really enjoyed it. I love your charters and the reactions of the Labyrinth characters to them. Particulaly when Jareth keeps thinking that Blythe and Shaylee might gang up on him! This reminded me so much of how me and my sister-in-law gang up on my brother. Would have loved to see that in a scene, but we can't put everything in every story now can we? :) I also liked Shaylee's run through the Labyrinth, with new twists on old puzzles and new puzzles mixed in. Thank you!

That was such a cute story and I don't know why but I just love the name Trystan for some reason lol anyways yay it was a great story to read.. and ... . gah I cant hold it in, the dragon's name kept messing me up and translated means "flying panda" lmao my brother told me that and I couldn't take him seriously since XD

I usually dislike non-Sarah stories but your writing has completely changed my heart. I love Shaylee. You did an amazing job developing her character. She's absolutely perfect for Jareth. I'm quite eager to read more or these two and their children.

This was just so darn cute I loved it! ,

i loved this story so much, you did an amazing job :D

wow this story was just amazing!

at the end, i admit, i did cry ;)

LOVED YOUR STORY! BRILLIANT! I like that Sarah wasn't your leading lady. I have a hard time dealing with Sarah so this was refreshing. I truely enjoyed it. thanks so much for the fun read.

Aw, what a cute, fluffy, happy ending. This was an excellent story and I can tell you worked very hard on it. Your descriptions and characterizations are really good. Good job and keep up the great work.

Hooray! I knew singing to Shaylee would get her memories back. Jareth just had to pick the right song.