I can't wait for you to finish this story.

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I am treading this and it gas already been completed...I like the story...but I really hope u let pen grow up as this story goes on...she is just so childish...petty and self centered...lol. reading on...lol

I absolutely love this story. Please come back and update. You are an awesome writer

Update this is really good

Who is Tyler?

Sooo good. I hope you update it soon

This is the best story I have read. I have read it 5 times. Will you be finishing it?

Can't wait for more

Oh my God! You have no clue as to how many times I reread this story! I just love it toooooo much and I neeeeeeeeeeddddd for you to finish it! PLEASEEEEEEEEEE! PLEASEEEEEEEEEE! PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!

Wow three Awesome day's of Reading this Wonderful Fanfiction I'm finally Glad Nick has Found Rachel Penelope and Derek are my Favortie Couple and People thanks so much for Writing this Amazing Fanfiction Would it be too Much to ask for an Update Please? I Love all the Kids and that Penelope and Rachel are Pregnant Awesome Job!

great story, looking forward to reading more! I hope that we see more of the interaction with Pen and Derek and the kids.

Please please PLEASE finish this story! I need to know how it ends. I've read this story 4 times because I just love it and I hope and pray that you continue and finish it.

This is such a good story i really hope you finish it. Took a long time to read but was worth it.

great job. keep it up.