suficientemente dramatico para que no le siguieras :,C que paso? yo que encuentro historias y no terminadas eso si que es dramatico para mi :,v XD

I still love this!
I hope this will be finished one day _

Y'know, this story is actually pretty well-written. But the way you phrased your summary, it sounded like you thought it wasn't at all! Have a bit more confidence when summarizing your work, and it'll appeal more!

Story-wise, I really liked the intro and the end, but the fluff was a bit over the top. Other than that, I enjoyed the exposition. Good work! ;D

oh how cute! I really love it!

Angsty edgey! Yay~ keep updating ok?