This was very well done, I can see IT fitting very well into the canon.

LOVE THIS! Well done!

Great POV shifts between Garrus and Shepard, nicely done!

beautiful. Really. You know how to use words in magnificient ways

Incredibly hot one-shot. The length was perfect and it was very nicely written too - but damn.. It must have been difficult to write. The unknown parts of the turian anatomy makes us fans kind of left in the dark, and even with the parts we do know.. Writing about another species' physiology (and especially making it seem sexy as well) is not easy at all. You hands down did a perfect job, in my opinion. Thumbs up from Denmark : )

Beautifully written, and very sweet, I loved it!

Amazing! This was so sweet, and I love how you captured both characters, this could totally have happened!

ALright!

Out of all the variations of the scripted Romance Scene, i think I liked this the best. You wrote both the characters very well and unlike Bioware, you didn't just hint at it. (I understand why they did, but still)

I hope to see more form you in the Future!

COOL! just cool :)

Very nicely written, and touching.

d'! ~~~ thats the noise that was involuntarily coming from me when i finished this. :D this is brilliant and sexy and amazing. I love what you've done here. They work so perfectly together, both physically and emotionally. its amazingly done. Gods, what I wouldn't give to have seen what happens beyond the headbump. And this is perfectly plausable.

:D 3 much love for this.

this was the best love scene between these 2 tht i have read, keep it up!

Great writing :)

Say it with me now: D'awwwwwwwwwww.

Very cute rendition of the few hours before the Omega 4 Relay. .

Holy hanar, that was hot.

Beautifully written...very plausible.