Jabberwocky? From Alice in the Wonderland? By Chris something? Or something? I popped over to your profile page. I’m guessing this will never be continued then.

*gasp* Are they vampires?

An angel? Could Gilbert be a (fallen?) angel? Nice story. ) never thought of it this way ]

are they leviathans? cuz thats what the clues are hinting towards

Is there going to be another chapter? I just found this story and really like it. I would love to find out what Gilbert is.

Is Gilbert like a shifter(Werewolf?) hmmm, very interesting plot. Could you give a bio for all the characters that have already been identified( as different creatures)? Just for a sort of reference so idiots(Point finger at self) can remember who is who and what they can do?

Like the idea. Oh and for creatures what about Nyads and Dryads? You know water and wood nymphs? Or maybe a hydra? I'm drawing from greek mythology if you can't tell. Just some ideas hope you like them.

Lemme guess, Gilbert is like a Angel or something, right? I'm almost positive his mum is for the saint Maria order. Or something like that... Hey, are alfred and gilbert still countries?

hi! this seems really interesting, but it gets pretty hard to follow in many places. it gets a little choppy, and it wasn't until i think chapter 2 or 3 (somewhere around there) that i found out Jack was a girl and not a guy. i suggest going back and fixing up some of those places so that it's easier to read. like i said, it's really interesting and seems like it can be really, really good. the flow's just not really there. i can feel a flow in some places, but then a boulder gets thrown in, and i'm tossed overboard and end up having to find my bearings. (does that make sense at all?)

but i really want to keep reading and figuring out what Gilbert is. i like what Alfred and Rain are. :)

that reminds me... i know you touched on what Rain looked like in the chapter when Lea first saw her, but i still can't get a clear picture on her. it's a little blurry with the few descriptions you gave. Alfred and Gilbert i can picture fine since they're not OC's, but the others... what do they look like? my brain keeps changing their looks to try and fit what i think they probably look like, but i'm not sure. also, when you *did* describe Alfred and Rain, it was all in one paragraph, which, again, obstructed the flow of the story. when describing, don't bunch everything up at once (trust me, i'm bad at that and had to have someone point it out to me). sort of space it out a bit as you're moving on.

well, that's about all i have to say right now, seeing as it's getting a little late here. i hope you update soon! i'd really like to find out what Gilbert is, b/c i truthfully have no idea. keep going! bye! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Really like this story, it's different.

This story is Awesome! I really wanna read more of it :)

and I have no idea what Gilbert is XD

if you don't get enough reviews I'm gonna review after every chapter!

Hope that makes you write faster XD

I'm quite ashamed to say I couldn't figure out what any of them were and I still can't figure out what Gilbert is. m

I actually watch stuff like Supernatural too. Anyways, I'm going to go ahead and guess that Gilbert is a guardian angel cause of the whole Teutonic Knights thing. Can't wait for your next update! C:

So happy I just found this! I love supernatural stuff but I so suck at guessing...your killing me! Can't wait for more so come out of your corner, this is a great fic!

Is either Alfred or Gilbert a Shade? What about Rain being an Elemental or something like that?

I really have like no idea but I LOVE YOUR STORY! It rocks and your author notes are fun too! So I am totally following it now! YAY!

Okay, I really hope this review helps get you out of that corner of sad, because that corner is not fun at all! So cheer up!

I think Alfred is some sort of spirit and I love this story please hurry with the next chapter.