Beautiful...*sniff sniff* stupid onions.

Very cute :)

THAT WAS SO CUTE.

Lovely! Lovely! Absolutely loved it!

Lovely

*faints in sheer delight* Now I want one of those heady grown-up kisses too! :)) Good job! Excellently written.

Aw, that was beautiful. Very sweet. Just detailed enough to give you the warm fuzzies without being over the top. Very well done. :D

My, my that was cute c:

Although, I'm sure just about everyone else who has reviewed has said something like that.

But it was interesting take on such simple matters as kissing. Two thumbs up! x3

I've been meaning to comment ages ago since I've saved the story but life kept getting in the way. This was simply beautiful. I actually found myself tearing up at the towards the middle and again at the end. You did a wonderful job explaining the meanings behind each kiss and capturing the happiness, turmoil, and love that made up Ed and Al's life. Very well done.

that was quite cute:)

That was really cute :)

It's a very cute short story 3 good job D

AWS D No more needs to be said. ) Tis awesome.

aww how nice! :D

What can I say? This is totally sweet.

I felt like extreme sappiness, especially if it's between Roy and Ed. It's not always Ed initiates the relationship, and I love the way you portrayed him to be not snarky-but-oh-so-sexy, but naive-and-still-a-child-but-oh-so-sexy. Because it's just so nice when Roy Mustang finally bends and gives him a gentle leading hand.

Yeah, we love you too. *Blows a kiss which promptly rebounds against some invisible barrier and gets plonked on the head* Heh, heh.