A good chapter to celebrate Sirius's freedom and nice display for Dudley but sad Sirius dark heritage show through.
So why are they hanging around No4 where Dumbledore will find them?
Snape?
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Interesting story and good to read, but I’m a bit puzzled about your pace of publishing. Close to four years and only 13K? Not that I could do much better, but what are your plans for this story and when will we see them?

Good tale, but is it one you are really interested in finishing? I noticed you started it quite a while ago, and I don't want to get to involved in a good story if it won't be finished.

Hmmm, I rarely think about it, but really, what kind of wizarding family is inept enough to harbor an illegal fugitive animagus? Bad Weasleys...bad...lol.

Keep going

A good chapter for Sirius to be freed and Arthur and Molly are afraid that the Ministry will find out where he has been hiding and not that a old death eater has been hiding in their boy's rooms all these years and that Dumbledore failed to discover the rat when he gave Ronald a suitable UN-escapable cage.
Will the upgraded security find marked death eaters?
Will they find more than they were looking for at the Crouches?
What is Dumbledore's response to Sirius' freedom?
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excellent story

I'm so curious what all the time travelers are going to do about their identities, heheheh. I will probably love whatever you come up with. Okay, well really it's only James and Lily that should worry...

Thank you! Loved this chapter, although I did prefer the lovely wand part in the previous chapter. What can I say? Love anything to do with wands.

I really like this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.

sympa

An interesting chapter for Harry to bring back James and Lily. Will they have any special abilities considering where the flesh came from and the use of the stone?
Good Sirius did the right thing to catch a rat but will Dumbledore allow him to go free and ruin his Greater Good?
Will Harry skip Hogwarts this time?
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Great start!

3. An interesting start to a Master of Death redo with future knowledge last stand to kill Voldemort, death, another chance to fix everything, time travel return to 91. Grey powerful Harry. Dumbledore's manipulations at No4 exposed. Vernon down, Petunia freed and Dudley unbound. Start friendship with Draco but doesn't Lucius needs to be put down? Interesting connection to Garrick Ollivander.
Good to take and replace the stone before Hagrid but what will Harry do to Quirrellmort?
So what will Harry do to change the bullying bigoted pure-blood culture that keeps Dumbledore in power and generates dark wizards?
How did Dumbledore get to be included in a meeting to decide Harry's future with other great witches and wizards of the ages; Merlin, Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin? He was the one who almost destroyed everything. He should have gone to the other place.
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I am curious to see where you go from here. Though I do have to point out one apparent inconsistency. In this chapter, you appear to be making Dumbledore into an evil bastard. But in the previous chapter, Sirius says this: "We've been in meetings with other great witches and wizards of the ages; Merlin, Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Dumbledore.. You get the picture." If Dumbledore is so evil and controlling, then why would he have agreed to send Harry back to change things? And why would they even have consulted him? It doesn't fit.

Yes! I like Draco. He has a better name than other characters so I automatically favor him for Harry. As friends, I mean. :D By the way, Ron has an ugly, stupid name. So, can he fall in a well and not get out? Please? Some other people have boring names as well...

Bank robbing, lol, always fun. I just have a love for it. *grins happily*

Loved reading this! Thank you and good luck! _
Magical Dudders? Excellent.