Reviews for A Better World
bichenta chapter 1 . 5/1
Very nice!
BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 3/28
People have similar knee-jerk cliches about Draco's parents like the ones you complain about at the end of the story. They don't get how people can be bitter enemies and remain... people. Make no mistake, Lucius Malfoy was one cruel, cruel man to those he thought of as enemies. Much like the complainers, he has problems seeing his enemies as human at all, a problem Riddle had exploited the Hell out of in his rise to power and in both wars.

That said, he didn't beat Narcissa, nor did he terrorize Draco. He was a husband and a father. People are not easily defined, they aren't all that one-dimensional. It's a lazy way of thinking about others, and it really, really needs to stop.
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
I like the Albus and Scorpius are best friends ... Where else woud he go with initials like this - ASP, and friends like Scorp!
LiloLunaPotter chapter 1 . 7/16/2019
I love this! xx
Beautiful writing and fantastic characterization.
I like how you make Harry and Draco so easy to empathize with and show how reasonable they both are (I’m a bit sick of fics that have them fighting for no reason).

Anyway, we’ll done, such a great read.
HermioneIsEpic chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
Awwww
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
Excellent story!
mangoopineappleee chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
I think this might be my favorite fanfiction ever. As a Draco fan, I've always admired him, but in the fashion that you've written him. This one shot is exactly what I want to see of Draco Malfoy and how he grew from the war.
HgSpartan chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
Wow. This is very well written and incredibly touching. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
Great story. Love this version of Draco, I believe he becomes a better man too.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2017
I normally don't go for headcannons, at least for Harry Potter. But this fic is, by far, the best representation of post-war canon!Draco that I have yet to read. The idea of Albus not being subject to ludicrous amounts of surveilance charms (and random bystanders) when the family is out and about stretches credulity, though. I guess with the hat his 'Harry Potter clone' looks were rather hidden, but I still would think Harry would be a paranoid bastard, doubled by his auror training. But Draco's vigilante spying was spot on. I really would love to see him in that role (and written to this quality) again.

Very, very nice one-shot.
tigersmeleth chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
Beautiful little story.
LoneTraveler chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
Draco' grown quite a bit by being a Dad. Well done!
Chosandylee chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
Hi love your story. I am wondering when you are going to upload your story A POUND OF FLESH. I am reading your story from other site i.e Hawthorne and vine. Please upload that story. A big fan of your.
AndromacheHector chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
Really good story - best one shot I've read in a while.
Jummper chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
Okay ... (sniff) i'm not cry, okay ... but WHO THE *peeeeepp* PUT SOME ONIONS IN FRONT OF ME!

I'm so sorry for being dramatic. And thanks for write this story. So heartwarming(?)
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